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person roro237
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know I always forget to mention how much I enjoy the titles of the chapters! They alway help me prepare for what you may have in mind:) Of course I only get them after I read the chapter:) I do so adore Shika and Naruto relationship. I fall more and more in love with Naruto with each time you write about him... Hey! I'm loven the idea of alot of updates but PLEASE not to the point of death to the writer! We need you ^_^
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for bringing Shikamaru around so soon. Naruto tickling his toes was excellent! And Neji is wearing the ring now, that's so cool!

And go Asuma!

I know what you mean about wanting to share the story the minute the chapter is finished. Although, I have never written 68 chapters of anything.
person cynaga
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for putting up the chapters as soon as you write them. I really appreciate it.

I love how Naruto puts his arm into Shi-chan's tank through the gel to squeeze his toe.
person nivell
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, we've gone over this before but it always makes me sad when Naruto talks about the future knowing that he wouldn't live for more than 10 or 15 years. Haven't had the time to leave a review, but have read most of your updates.
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love your stuff and find it one of the most in joy able tales to read i am hopeing that you can keep writing it and updating it as often as you have been
person meowkuu2
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i was soo worried that shi-chan wouldn't come around mew...when u do resolve the kabuto situation...i hope u make him pay for what he did! beat him up! other than that..wow, you do have a lot of stuff to juggle in this story, you might make it up to 100 or more chapters ( a dream come true for me if it passed that *sighs*) i love to read, can't help it..i'm wondering now if you're going to include other characters or make mention of them, like we now know that naruto is technically hella old (which ties into how old kyuubi is in the anime/manga beautifully i might add) and will u make mention of his "parents" there are so many things you can make use of, modify or adapt to your story.
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor sasuke it was not entirely his fault that he let kabuto on board.....he had neji and shika tell him it was okay but that they should be cautious....kinda pissed at naruto for blaming him...even if he did "forgive" him...not right not right at all...poor sasuke i hope he is able to handle the stress of the guilt....ugh
person Dorkchic
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! By the way, aren't there security monitors throughout the ship? You would think that Sasuke, Naruto, and especially Neji would want to review the security tapes of Kabuto's visits daily to make sure that he was not doing anything shady.
I hope that something really agonizing and SLOW happens to both Kabuto and Orochimaru. It would be even better if Oro found out that Kabuto had hidden all of this from him after it is all resolved and made him into a lab rat.
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought Naruto was harsh with Sasuke. I don't think he is obsessed, he just loves him alot and wants as much time as possible:/ I'm sure if it was reversed Naru would do the same thing
lol at Shika waking up at late morning.
person roro237
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cracked up at Naruto little growl-fes:) I wish I could growl life would be so much easyer:) Anyways he told Sasuke why he was pissed and he wasn't ready to forgive him yet. I was pleased Naruto did that but sad when Sasuke cryed in the shower:( I know I was happy Sasuke was trying to fine away to prolong Naruti life. I'll take my share of the blame and pinch myself for Nar getting so upset:) Of course Naruto would know what might wake up Shi-chan! Asuma-san wOw asking the tough questions! I thought this chapter was heavenly ^_^