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person RyuEarth
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was on pins and needles the whole chapter, and then i got to the end of it and I smiled cause that was so Kakashi! XD

Thanks for the update
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say, 'Oh shit' I so wasn't expecting a new chp yet and is it inappropriate to propose? I love you as an author and this story I the shiznits!!!
person cynaga
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I recorded this episode on my DVR so that I can watch it again later.


Have I mentioned that you rock? Hn. Thought so.

HEY ALL --- I am proud to have been the first person to have reviewed this fic.
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL I was so worried about Shikamaru and Neji and Kisame until the very last two sentences. The more things change...

You have yourself a bona fide winner here. Thank you for your speedy updates.
person roro237
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! It was so sweet even if Kakashi doesn't want to admit that Sasuke is like his son and Shika-chan his little brother:) This hold weekend's chapters have been so awesome and intense and down right incredible!! You rise the bar with ever chapter and then you jump over that with the next chapter! What I'm saying is "I love YOUR story". ^_^
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Boy Kisame took that a lot better than I thought he would. Kashi is a total pervert for thinking about sex at a time like that, but hey the man needed some stress relief....lol....I hope they get Itachi back before Kabuto or Orochimaru do something to horrible to him. As much as I think he needs to stay asleep he doesn't deserve to have more pain in his life. Good chapter. Thanks for the update
person meowkuu2
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omfg!!!!! i'm dying! the suspense in killing me, please please tell me someone is gonna snap and kabuto's body parts are gonna go flying...and what about orochimaru? are you planning to incorporate the snake-like characteristics from the anime and make him into a hybrid or a chimera??
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! OMG!

Holy crap!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man that is going to cause major problems. Kisame and the kid are going to be devastated and willing to leave the Uchiha just to protect thier loved ones, and they are the two fighters that could match Naruto in combat...not good....and if Shika is dead or incapacitated Naruto is going to flip, and who knows what he will do....hopefully Sasuke can keep him focused.....ugh I knew we had a ride coming. Good chapter great scene changes and flow of action. Can't wait to read more.
person roro237
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The first thing I have to do is ~bow~ to you! That was alot and wOw was it good! The way you covered what everyone was doing was incredible! Could I get this episode on DVD today? Thank you for all the hard work! You are the BomB ^_^