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person cynaga
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EXCITEMENT~! (you spoil us)

Oh NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shika in a coma?
person liby318
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say about the last chapter is WOW. Great action. Thanks and can't wait for the next one.
person RyuEarth
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Kabuto and Orochimaru die! =/

and are Kotetsu and Izumo and Kurenai and her kids ok?
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is riveting. couldn't put it down once i started reading! love the universe, love the characters. i laughed and i cried... this is amazing. please do continue. this is such a treat. thank you!
person the_boyfriend
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yo,

to answer your question. Yes, I would keep on reading. It's awesome, honey for bees :) I'm glue to it. True, I just started but it's really good. Keep up with the good work. I can wait to read up to the last 'page' of the your manuscript (the way your going at it). And you know what, maybe your next story would be your own. But, fanfiction is good to.

read you later & good luck

:)
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And so it begins...
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap O.O That was exciting ^_^
person cynaga
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG

Not Kabuto...


so good~!
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww Hell.....is this how Naruto is going to offer himself to Oro.....he attacks Sasuke feels guilty and leaves??? I hope not.....just my imagination being mean and cruel....okay well so much for the calm...here comes the storm and angst that accompanies it....HOLD ON people.
person roro237
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! The babies? Naruto is attacking Sasuke? Kabuto that son of a girl dog! You kept his character dead on the money. Creepy snicky jerk! I was nervous soon as I seen the title:) I didn't know what to except?! You are the bOMb! That was incredible and the cliffy is a back braker! I have to say a Yea baby on this chapter! wOw!