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WoW!!! This chapter is so incredible! Once again I was on the ship with the crew:) Naruto with the babies is just warm and sweet I never get tier of it:) You know how happy I am to hear he will get treatments for his ageing! Gaara getting to have some feeling again wonderful! I think Temari expressed it best by bowing to Shika. Ibiki the queen I love it! You come up with such crazy ideas and they work like a charm:) Shika and Neji in the shop yea that's what fantasies are made of:) I love this chapter ^_^

This last chapter was beautifully written as all chapters have been. It held many heartwarming scenes such as Shikamaru going out for Neij and the funny little bit with Tayuya picking a fight with Sumaru. I have to say the ending with Temari getting to see a different side of Gaara and her bowing to Shikamaru for making it possible was the best. As always I look forward to the next chapter and thank you for all your hand work creating this story.

I have no idea why you keep apologizing for these vignettes I LOVE THEM and you are right they become essential to the story. Okay so here is what I liked about this chappie
1. OMG the babies listening to Naruto's heart...how sweet..
2. Tayuya getting all upset about the sex stuff...can't wait for her to chillax and start having urges to get it on with some one...I don't know why, but I would love to have Haku take pitty on her and be her first just because I know he can help her...if he gets over his dislike of her...that would totally be sweet
3.Neji and Shika acting out scenes....LOVE IT, and Anko learning from the experienece....that was good stuff..
4.Gaara and his controller....UGH made me want to cry when Temari hugged him.

So those were my favorite parts...thanks for the update as usual can't wait for more.

Whenever I read this amazing story I perk up at the mention of Shikamaru. It is undeniable that he is without a doubt my favorite Naruto character. I love what you have done and continue to do with him in this story and all the progress in his and Neji's relationship. (Not to take away from what you have done with the others!)

I don't have many words to express what a joy it is to read this as that would take too long to type, but there is always a joyful, loud "Yes!!" heard by anyone in the vacinity when I see you've updated, lol.

Welcome, Inari-kun. Nice work on those pedos!

I am comfortable with the idea that you, Mannah, are as addicted to writing this story as we are to reading it.^_^

It is so cool that you will later be talking about Wave, and I love Kotetsu and Izumo! XD

Also, Inari was rather cool! I like that Kakashi sees his potental! And his crush on Tayuya is so cute/funny! I laughed outloud when I read what Konohamaru said about her cutting it off and giving it back to him, that was priceless (but I hope that she doesn't! Inari and Tayuya would make a cute couple, I think so anyway)

Thanks so much for the update! I loved it! ^^ <3

The new arrivals are great! Even more surprising was Kakashi:) The man does seem to have an eye for quality!! ^_^

Alright! Gaara has a controller! But it's so sad, such a Spartan existence. And no sleep...

Shikamaru is the MAN.

A female cat on their crew. And Tayuya, no less. I think this will probably be the worst punishment, even if it does her the most good. What is up with Tsunade's crew? Honestly.

Iruka-sensei is my hero.

Naruto and Sasuke are the best.

I know this one at a glanze does not seem like an overly emotional chapter....but I cried twice.....once with the Gaara scenerio, and once when Naruto came into the galley to defend Iruka. It caught me by surprise I was not expecting the sadness. I really hope, that things will go back to normal when they randevouz with the Silver Leaf again.

I love what Iruka-sensei did for Tayuya-kun.

I wish someone would animate this wonderful tale~! I can't say enough how much I enjoy this story.