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person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww Shino is the Man.......that is the way to handle Anko....is he preparing his wife maybe??? I wonder what his family would think??? Hmmm....good match though...I'm glad she is there to take his mind off his once crush on Shika....now if only Neji would accept that darned ring.....
person nivell
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Shino and Anko are so sweet together.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww Shika if Naruto found you in the Nursery with Neji, I'd think you'd need the controller...^___^....great chapter
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HELL YES to making the women WORK FOR IT!

I love it that Shino is not allowing his dick to make his decisions. I love it that when Tayuya the hell-cat went batshit on Haku, Iruka stepped in, sent Naruto *the bouncer* to round her ass up and then tossed her in solitary until she learned some freaking manners. I love it that when her crewmates went to Sasuke in protest, he had this to say: His nascent sympathy vanished. “It was not a ‘few clothes’, Anko-san. It was an act calculated to cause a great deal of pain. Most of us have some possessions that mean more to us than their material worth. Whether you are capable of understanding that or not, you are wasting your time here. I have no intention of overruling Iruka-sensei. I suggest that you raise your concerns with him. Please close the door on your way out.”

OH, HELL YES!

I don't know how Tayuya is going to survive with Sasuke's crew once they split them, but I'll enjoy reading about it.

And I don't know what to say about Anko. On one hand, I can totally understand being in the room with Shino and not being able to think about anything but sex. On the other hand, she should take a lesson from Shikamaru. He wanted intimacy with Neji enough to step WAY out of his comfort zones to get it--and then stay out of them. Anko just isn't trying hard enough.

I love it that Gaara is now part of this fic, even if he is staying in hibernation to spite his sister.

I love it that the babies are part Shikamaru, and I won't forget that.

Thank you for such quick updates.
person RyuEarth
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved that we finally figured out Iruka's age! XD

And I loved Shino and Anko in this chapter! She was so funny and cute, and the chocolates were priceless!

Thanks for the update! ^^
person roro237
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think? You're getting better and deeper as we go! That was so wonderful I loved it:) You covered alot of people and you put just the right amount on them. Ir-chan and Anko was so sweet and funny with her saying that about her mother:) Neji and Shika great! Shino has beautiful eyes?! Sasuke talking to the kids darring! Best of all Naruto answering Gaara questions loved it! Have I told you lately I love YOUR story? I love YOUR story! ^_^
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
rofl I thik Naruto would really hurt Shika for even thinking about doing anything in his nursery rofl.
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO! EXCELENTE!

Hooray for Anko who's getting a piece of Shino pie! Hooray for Shino, who made Anko have dinner with his family before he put out! Hooray for Sasuke, who has committed to trying his best to be a genuine father! Hooray for Neji and Shikamaru, who love each other enough to make bizarre compromises!

AND HOORAY TO MANNAH PIERCE, WHO HAS CREATED HER OWN TERABITHIA WITH THIS AWE-INSPIRING FIC. I APPLAUD YOU!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love love love this universe u have unfolded before our eyes, i await with endless anticipation of each new chapter :)
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES! BREAKTHROUGH! GAARA HAS HAD A BREAKTHROUGH!!!!!

This has made my day.