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person roro237
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This chapter was an anime episode:) I loved it! It was so visual!! The begin was so exciting and intense with Haku!!! I have never read Kisame in this light before. It's great!!!! YOUR story is amazing ^_^
person Nivell
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, Kisame has the patience of a saint. I actually feel bad for Itachi in this story. Poor crazy fool. I'm glad that Haku and Kisame are really getting along in this chappy..
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Loved the Haku Kisame loving! I hope that Kisame can become a replacement for Zabusa in Haku's life and that Haku becomes someone that Kisame would live for after Itachi is gone.

I still can't wait to see Uchiha babies around...especially the little girl who will look so much like Sasuke.

Your Itachi is so tortured and evil different from cannon Itachi, that it is hard for me to root for a reconciliation, but I hope that maybe there is a death scene where Itachi comes around to himself and asks Sasuke for forgivness so there is at least a bit of closure for Sasuke in that part of his life. I'm not sure I want him to survive I just think his death in the tank would be anticlimactic.
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I love Kisame. But why do I have this feeling that something is just going to go awfully wrong for him.. O.o

Kiki
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hell, are they going to have to fix Itachi now?! Give a man an inch...hopefully he won't stick around too long, especially since THEY MADE A LITTER! LITTLE SASUKE X SHIKAMARU BABIES! YAY!

Yay! Gaara's here! The Gaara from Naruto, the social misfit we have all come to know and love. Yay!

That Naruto is a pretty handy guy to have around, isn't he?
person Nivell
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, the drama!! Wow, you've got me shivering in my seat thinking of what's going to happen next. Will the crew accept Itachi in their ship? Will Itachi go even more bonkers?? Lord, what about the babies! Lol, I'm excited!
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man Sasuke has taken a huge risk at not telling the other's who they were meeting! I hope the Elite don't throw a huge fit. I'm wondering how Itachi got hurt and what he will do once he wakes. I'm assuming it is some type of illeness since Kisame would never allow Itachi to get hurt in battle. Anyway this was a good chapter and I hope Rin gives in to having the Uchiha babies in the crew room. I also hope Sasuke won't go into one of his funks now that his brother is before him.

Thanks for the updated hope you update again soon.
person cynaga
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written; intricately woven. Just gets better and better. What a treat~! THANKS!!!! ♥
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love how you over came Garra-kuns sleep troubles lol it works so welli will be returning home soon but im so happy to have had something to read while im waiting for some things to get finished lol
person RyuEarth
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THanks for the update!

And I hope that the one that has the 18% to look like Kakashi, looks like him! *keeps fingers crossed* lol ^^