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person roro237
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
From my reading perspective the chapter was incredible! Naruto was so sad and sweet saying what not to do:) And Sasuke of course showed his true Uchiha-ness smarts and conning to get what he needed. I never tired of their love for each other. I do understand Shika side of the coin. All though the punishent from him to Sasuke might have a little bit of pleasure in it:) Whenever you're ready with the next chapter I'm ready to read it ^_^
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really looking forward to the genetically engineered babies....I'm glad that you will be giving them and opportunity to know Naruto, but I have to plead that you not kill him...please find a way for him to survive. I read Constellations last month and when Naru died in that fiction....I cried so many buckets of tears it wasn't funny I really don't think I have it in me to read another fiction in which Naruto dies.

person roro237
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I admit I had to go back to 29:( Or maybe I just went back to reread the 'Shower':) I confess I had forgotten. But while I was there I did reread 29 thanks:) Shika that sneaky devil hacking! Ir-chan was wonderful as usual! My favorite part was Sasuke watching Naruto with the children. He can't help himself. He has to have kids with Naruto one why or another. Have I told you lately how much I love YOUR story? I love your ^_^
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke's a persuasive little something, isn't he? And what is up with Temari? Jealous much? She can't have Shikamaru, he's Neji's.

I can't wait for Gaara to finally meet Naruto!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love how you are making this work for them all also i love the 7 kisses
person RyuEarth
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked how Iruka treated Tayuya! =)

Thanks for the update!
person RyuEarth
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the little parts about the rings! Haku's reaction was so cute! And Iruka's choice was priceless, even more so when he doesn't know how much it is worth! XD

I also hope that Haku and Rin will beable to help Neji and I like where the story is heading too! =)

Thanks for the update!!! ^^
person roro237
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! I loved it!! Showing the inter works of the day. Helping Neji solving his problems. Ir-chan picking out a ring:) Plus it looks like the Heros might have their first job!!! ^_^
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do not envy the path that Neji is about to embark on. I certainly wish he and Shikamaru the best.

I am praying that Temari's appearance in these most recent chapters is an indication that we will be introduced to her brothers very soon. I am missing Gaara very much here.

I am happy that Iruka got the most valuable ring that was available. He deserves it.
person RyuEarth
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel extra happy every time you write a chapter with Kakashi and Iruka in it! I just love them so much! XD

I just loved everything about this chapter basically! I loved the way that you described the girls, Temira and Tenten were rather funny too, like preditors almost lol.

And I think that Tsunade and Jiraiya know about the ring as well, if not, I would love to know what he did that one time too (thoughts of it make my head spin more with half-assed ideas that don't shut up, not that I really want them too)...

Anyway, I enjoyed the ending too! I love that Haku is growing into Iruka's shoes, that was so good!!!

Thanks so much for the update! I can't stop saying that I loved it so much! ^^