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person roro237
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The last three chapters had my emotions all over the place:) Warm fuzzy for the romantic heros I love dearly. Tears for the saddness that Sasuke will have to go on without Naruto. My heart wont stop hoping there might be away for Naruto to live longer. Laughing because Naruto was jumping in the bed:) Thank you for the wonderful weekend updates, I have to say it 'Yea Baby' ^_^
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I feel so bad for Sasuke! He is so lucky to have--well, everyone!
person cynaga
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story has beauty, elegance and depth ~ so many underlying psychological and philosophical issues too. I am enjoying the new aspect on aging and death via Naru-chan.
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aging is never a thing one wants to think about
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was just so.... *sigh* I do so love you.

Kiki
person asm613
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fugaku as leader of the clan knew that Kakashi already failed to protect a nephew of his_yet he now puts his son's life in his hands. Did Fugaku know that he was sending his son to be the whore of a space ship and that his son would also be whoring with his supposed protector-Kakashi? If this is all so---then this is one strange story--to strange for me to read.
person RyuEarth
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way that Iruka reacted, and Sasuke's temper was very real.

Thanks for the update!
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So let me get this straight...

Shikamaru went from being a geek whom no one noticed to having a fan club consisting of no less than Shino, Neji and now this Klennethorn guy. Shikamaru loves both Neji and Sasuke. Sasuke loves Naruto, who is himself wanted by Konohamaru and Orochimaru.

Jiminy Cricket.

I am concerned that the Klennethorn guy had everybody fooled, especially Shikamaru. If he can pull the wool over Shikamaru's, Neji's and Naruto's eyes, then the Uchiha is pretty much screwed. And what's with the 'tasteful' poses? It's Uchiha-porn, plain and simple. The guy's jealous--for all his good looks, power and money, he doesn't have anything that comes close to what Sasuke has.

I love how playful Naruto and Sasuke are with each other. There will be quite a song to sing for them at the end of it all.

Why does no one love Shino?





person Harvey
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have spent all the free time of three days reading this story. Your characters, while diffrent then the originals, have molded peferctly with this story. I have really enjoyed myself reading this. Cant wait for more.
person Nivell
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love love love the part where Naruto goes down first and waits for Sasuke to jump into his arms. Forget how young they are...as for that dirty old man's threat, maybe Naruto is a special fox ;)