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im going to have trouble sleeping tonight due to the chapter lol im going to be trying to think about how it could turn out

I would love to know more about the 'tasteful poses'! Specially with Kakashi and Iruka! *drools at the possibilities* XD

I also enjoyed that, though sad, it is true that foxes don't live as long as humans! When others create 'hybrids' they always make them better in every way to humans, and I enjoy the twist! =)

Thanks for the update! ^^

I hate Klennethon. I just do. *shrugs* I've just never had much use for someone who plays games with other peoples (especially if that someone is not me).

Kiki

For some reason, in the far future, I see Sumasu and Konohamaru as a couple (but that is just me and who knows where their personalities will go!) ^^;;

Also, I don't care what word you use to describe sex for! I say keep using fuck cause it works! =)
It's like ass and arse, they are the both thing, and I don't care ^^;;

Thanks for the update! No matter how the babies are produced, I can soooo see Iruka as a mother! XD

I dont think a glossary is necessary. You have given us e-machine, implant, drives, etc; and, it is enough. I dont really need a detailed description of it just the basic context in what it is used for. I have really enjoyed the last few chapters of this. I don't mind the language since the setting is pretty casual about sex the language fits. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

i have been a constant reader, though a mute one. my comment is on your wording Q, i think it is fine with the word fuck. in my family it always means no strings sex so i caught your meaning right away. however if offends it would be ashame to lose readers of a wonderfully written and very "alive" story over one word. and you would not lose me with the 16c. words either (history buff) though i would be afraid you might confuse a less learned person. just my 2 cents. :)

Firking or Ferking...they sound kinda stupid...granted the original word is jarring however it also draws your attention immediately and focuses you mind to the current situation going on in the story..I'd stick to *Fuck*..it suits the story.

I like the word fuck. Though it may seem crude to some people, in reality, it is far much common in everyday life also. I use it, my friends use it, people I know use it, it's not a word to be shy about. Come on now, we're all adults here, that's why this story is hosted on aff.net! So please use the word 'fucking', 'fuck' or whatever profanities you wish to use. I'm expecting it, lol! Besides, for a fic that centers itself in a hardened space world with men dominating the field, you'd expect a rougher term to describe love-making. Love making..psh, that's for pansies! Love your story so much!

Forgot to say in my earlier review. I read the previous comments and while it is nice of you to consider your reviewer's suggestions, remember that this is your story and you may choose to do whatever you want with it. Jesus, just reading that person's expectations makes my blood boil. This is your world, you decide if you want het or more female characters in your story. Just a suggestion but it really irks me when authors try to cater to every whim that their fans give out. Girl, I've read your story from the beginning and I truly love it so please please please you already have loyal readers out there that love your creation the way it is.

I personally have no issue with your gratuitous use of the word 'fuck'. Your intent translates adequately.

I don't need the glossary either.

I see you have segued via the use of the words 'cloning' and 'Kabuto'. Eek! I am mentally preparing myself. Unless I have written the fic, when the name Kabuto pops up, it is not a good thing.

I see your story writing itself and empathise. I was there once or twice. It was wonderful, if time consuming.

So...Shino loves Shikamaru. I suspected, but now that I've seen it in print...it's so sad. So unfair. *sighs*