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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I have read this story from the beginning and think it's a great combination of the Naruto characters and Sci- Fi. I also love the fact that you update so frequently. I look forward to more of the story.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! That was so intense!!! I loved every word!! WoW! The adding of Sumaru is crazy good:) I started reading this chapter setting back in my chair by the time I ended I was on the edge of the seat:) Yea Baby!!!!!! I can't wait to see how Naruto will react to this?! ^_^
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WFTH happened?!
In the blink of an eye everything changed! Wow! I can't wait to read the analysis of the boy's enhancement...
Thank you for updating so quickly. I am completely hooked on this story!
In the blink of an eye everything changed! Wow! I can't wait to read the analysis of the boy's enhancement...
Thank you for updating so quickly. I am completely hooked on this story!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This gets more incredible every chapter~! How do you do it? You weave a story like gossamar threads through the night...
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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so eager to see who the new charge is ^_^ I hope Shino wasn't the cause of Kono's breakdown :/
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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could I adore this story anymore than I already do?? I love your cliffhanger... I can't wait to see who the boy is...my nerves are shot wondering about your original characters and if they are gonna be bothersome..and having "O" in the storyline freaks me out completely..so exciting...I can't wait for the next chapter and how wonderful of you to keep us updated like you do. My favorite story on AFN!!!!
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February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so breath taken to me:) The wonderful care of Naruto for Sasuke. The sweet side of Sasuke letting Naruto hug up Konohamaru. I loved it! I'm very curious about the meeting? I can't wait to see what this guy wants. I couldn't figure out his riddle?! ^_^
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February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So this Klennethorn guy, he wants to collect them as a couple?! What?
Is the kid on the ship going to be a new cat? I can barely wait to find out.
LOL Ibiki is a freaking beast. And Naruto is like a carnival ride! Isn't Sasuke the lucky one? And WTF is up with Shino, LOL?!
Great chapter.
Is the kid on the ship going to be a new cat? I can barely wait to find out.
LOL Ibiki is a freaking beast. And Naruto is like a carnival ride! Isn't Sasuke the lucky one? And WTF is up with Shino, LOL?!
Great chapter.
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One of the great things about such a public forum for posting writing is thaht you can use it as almost an in-between state for your writing. Basically all your reviewers are your "post-posting" helpers and since nothing is printed yet editing fits in well. Your quality is good, your posting is fast (which I adore), and your charecters have personality with out just forcing each name into each chapter. On a side note I like your Shika. I hope you keep having fun with this story.
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whatever, I love everything and the mistakes are generally small at best. Just wanted to say I love the story and to keep up the good work.