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i can not edit ether and if im reading many chapters i cant always remember were i saw the mistakes tho i can spot them i cant spell or anything i wish i could beta but im not that good

I realize you have probably already received a ton of suggestions for possible cats, but I wanted to suggest Izumo. There is something so terribly uke about him.

Ok for point number 2: PLEASE DO NOT culled because it is taking up too much space. Whatever you've been doing PLEASE DO NOT STOP! Your story is fantastic!! I would think we all like sentiment:)
3: Who ever need time in the chapter is fine. 4: PLEASE DO NOT WORK MORE SLOWLY! I can't believe I'm the only one who likes getting spoiled with chapters up like you do it????:) If it aint broke done fix it.(PLEASE) You're in the zone of writting and I'm in the zone of loving it:) You know what I have to say next 'Yea Baby' I wish I had eyes like a english teacher. Thank goodness they don't check me for spelling or sentences structure. Or they would delete me before you even ead it:) By the by I loved this chapter ^_^

Sasuke is my favorite Naruto character. Indulge his insistence all you like.

Shino's a cheeky monkey, isn't he, LOL? We have to get this man a date. I just love him so much.

Please keep up the excellent work.

Found his name!! Kimimaro..and he is introduced in episode 119 of Naruto..he's only in it for a couple of episodes but in Shippuden one of the characters on Sasuke's group (JODY?) the big redhead has memories of him too. He's kind of sadly devoted to orchimaru as Haku was to Zabuto...anyways you might like him..he stuck in my head just like haku did. :)

gaara is my fav...he gets my vote and i love your story so much

For chapter 41: that newswoman has no ethics, unfortunatly, usually they have more manners and better ethics, though you portrayed the ones that don't, which is true because there are those out there that are bad... ^^;;;

And I really liked the part with Shikamaru asking Iruka for advice! I enjoyed that because it shows that he still has much to learn and Iruka is somebody who you can go and talk to and he can help all that he can! It is so sweet! XD

Thanks for the update!

For the cat -- You could use Inari, from the Wave arch. He's someone who would clash and come together with the characters, IMHO

Other than Sai, I don't see anyone else being attractive enough to cat, lol. Gaara yes, but like you said, he might turn into a psychotic cat. How about Suigetsu? Think the boy has too many teeth though.

I read your other reviewer's suggestions about using Inari and I looked up his image. OMG what a cutie! If you do use him, it'd be great if he and Konohamaru grow up together and eventually become loovers. =)