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person Nivell
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh, there is trouble up ahead! I love how unnerved the Uchiha fighters are towards Sasuke's screams and moans during sex. I find it cute how they worship Sasuke.
person RyuEarth
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
But a minute, wouldn't Iruka know a little about the money? At least for the crew wise? Since he takes care of stuff like that for the ship and Tsunade is a gambler? ^^;;;
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just as good as the others thank you again for sharing your talent with the rest of the world
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what Neji-san picked for Iruka-sensei to wear...

OMFG babies!!! Shino with a baby, it's too much! I'll get cavities!!!

And with Choza in the kitchen, you can bet no one is going to starve.

I loved this chapter!
person roro237
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! I was in the zone spending time with the crew. I don't know why I waited so long to start reading your story? Now that I have I'm in love with your writting:) The small details are just wonderful like: the small alarm Iruka had in his ear. I've seen it written before about Sasuke having kids and in this chapter Iruka was thinking about how good Naruto would be with kids. I know it's to early but who will have their kids? I think I'm like Naruto I don't want Sasuke with anyone else:) All my thumps up a fantastic chapter ^_^
person Nivell
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haku! But man, Zabuza had to do what he needed to do...it's still sad though.
person Halskr
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haku and Zabuza, I feel really bad for them especially Zabuza who did this so that Haku could have a good life and be happy. I really like your vision of the future. It isn't Star Trek all nice and tidy. It is more like Dune or Firefly where human nature doesn't change much regardless of how far we go. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww I expected Zabuza to join the crew :/ Why didn't he?
I basically expected Zabuza to join as crew, and him and Haku would be just like Iru and Kashi or Sasu and Naru. Then Konohamaru would join as the new cat :/
I would like a bit of info on the decision. Haku really had hope of Zabuza returning for him *pout* You broke him >.>
That's so sad in an emotional way.
person Colette
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Credit problems, jajaja, that was good.
What would you do about Zabuza? Is he planning to offer him a place in Uchihas now that he is sure that the man cares about Haku? We'll see in next chapter, I suppose. See you!
person RyuEarth
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Zabuza must die! =\