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I really like the idea of continuing on, I love that its an epic story..i'm a little worried about Naruto and his lifespan but i love where your story has taken us so far so i'll just continue reading and hope for the best because each twist and turn is wonderful in of itself. :)

i beliv you should start on a new st on chapt 1 like a continuetion of book one that is the perfect ending to a book you should totally open a new.
p.s. sorry if this is the first time i review but yous incase i totally lov this st to the max
jane
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I think it would be fine to continue under this title. I speak for myself when I am a new reader to a story that absorbs me the first few chapters and see there are 100!!! Length should not be daunting but anticipatory especially if it is being continued. However, if you decide to do side stories like Fu's or Kono kun's love issues then I would make those separate.

i like if you end it here or do a skip in the future where the kids are like 7 and 8 that be kool...i like to see itachi haku and kisame have a baby together ^.^ that be cute for them

Continue with chapter 92. If the readers give this story a chance, they will find themselves drawn in and not intimidated, but always looking for the next chapter.

You have the best story going on AFF. I understand your concern for scaring off new readers with more chapters.This is a good closing point for this story and I will read your continuation no matter how slow you have to go. I apprieciated the amount of time you dedicated to this story up to this point. Your writing skills are unsurpassed in this fiction world. You rock. Please continue with the story and give it another cool name to catch readers attention to start off with.

I vote for a chapter 1 =). Good job

I've read the whole thing and enjoyed it very much. i usually stay away from Naruto/Sasuke pairings, but this one pulled me in because you involved everyone. Nice job, I'm sad to see it end, I've looked forward to the updates. As far as an epic goes - I'm an epic writer myself. When i got to about 106 chapters I started a sequel (which just picked up where the first one left off) - more for my ease in handling the document than any other reason. People had no trouble picking up on the next section. Since you're setting it three years later i'dd say do the stepping stones as separate and then start a new fic for three years and onward but, that's just my opinion!

1. This was beautiful, not a dry eye in the house. A fitting ending to an epic tale.

2. I agree that reading a fic that already boasts 100 chapters is going to feel like assigned schoolwork for someone who doesn't know better. I think you should begin at chapter one of a new fic.

3. If you decided to stop here I would not blame you. YOu have given your readers something generously epic for which we are grateful. We've learned a bit about writing style as well, I suspect.

4. I hope you're published and on a best-seller list someday soon.

Babies! How about writing an epilogue in the next chapters and then make a new post for the new arc? So that it won't deter potential readers from reading this story. But however way you put it, the summary is interesting enough to click on the story link!