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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Talk about being cruel to be kind...
Haku has grown on Sasuke. I adore what he told Haku before he left with Zabuza. I love it that Shikamaru and Naruto take such excellent care of their Uchiha, as though he were priceless. It's beautiful to read and imagine.
Haku has grown on Sasuke. I adore what he told Haku before he left with Zabuza. I love it that Shikamaru and Naruto take such excellent care of their Uchiha, as though he were priceless. It's beautiful to read and imagine.
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooo, Zabuza! Haku (who I actually like now)! Whyyyyy!
Kiki
Kiki
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The epic journey has begun:) Zabuza really surprise me. Thank goodness he was thinking of Haku. Just for the recorder I loved this chapter ^_^
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The lastest chapter was great and exciting but heads up, there were a few misplaced words here and there and which is a rarity since most of your chapters come out perfect. ;)
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-Chapter1
I've seen this fic around, and noticed you update quite often. So I decided to give your fic a go.. The premise is interesting, there's not a lot of Naruto sci-fi fics out there. The first chapter is a bit bumpy though, there are a few grammar errors here and there and I had to read over a couple of sentences a few times to understand what you were trying to convey. All and all though, you introduced interesting concepts such as crews, the role of cats, what's up with the Uchiha clan, and so on. Will move on to the second chapter now! :)
I've seen this fic around, and noticed you update quite often. So I decided to give your fic a go.. The premise is interesting, there's not a lot of Naruto sci-fi fics out there. The first chapter is a bit bumpy though, there are a few grammar errors here and there and I had to read over a couple of sentences a few times to understand what you were trying to convey. All and all though, you introduced interesting concepts such as crews, the role of cats, what's up with the Uchiha clan, and so on. Will move on to the second chapter now! :)
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that last line is a master stroke i love it
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is the man.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the very ending of chapter 38 made me laugh!
thanks for the update!
though i wish we got more from Iruka's pov! ^^;
thanks for the update!
though i wish we got more from Iruka's pov! ^^;
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Things I like about this chapter:
The fact that Asuma did not take advantage of his right to 'compensation' because of Irukas mistake.
The part where Naruto makes the elite understand why they need to accept the new accomadations at the Uchiha Household, and how this would affect Sasuke if they did not.
The part where Sasuke assures Asuma that he views Kisame as someone who will be redeemed and brought back into the new Uchiha.
Naruto's last statement to the eliete about Sasuke's accomadations....not being like theirs at all becasue he will have him to keep him warm at night....LOVED IT.
The fact that Asuma did not take advantage of his right to 'compensation' because of Irukas mistake.
The part where Naruto makes the elite understand why they need to accept the new accomadations at the Uchiha Household, and how this would affect Sasuke if they did not.
The part where Sasuke assures Asuma that he views Kisame as someone who will be redeemed and brought back into the new Uchiha.
Naruto's last statement to the eliete about Sasuke's accomadations....not being like theirs at all becasue he will have him to keep him warm at night....LOVED IT.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol Sasuke's room is differnt because Naru lives in it rofl. Quite a big difference ^_^