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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woa! Tremendous end of chapter!
I like the idea of the household as base. See you!
I like the idea of the household as base. See you!
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely magnificent story. So much attention to detail, such in-depth descriptions, an interesting and compelling plot, and the added allure of romance. This story is quite possibly one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read. Truly and undoubtedly amazing.
Please, please update soon. This story has become air for me!
Please, please update soon. This story has become air for me!
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
L O V E D it!!! My visual of the compound nice!! It will be wonderful! Iruka had me teary eyed. I'm so happy Asuma forgave him without pain or death. Your story keeps me smiling crying and wanting more:) Thank you for all your hard work ~bowing~ ^_^
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I adore the elite fighters..so loyal..kinda stupid in a heartbreakingly naive way.
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I love the latest chapter. I felt bad for the Uchiha Elite fighters seeing as how they were little more than slaves or servants in the old Uchiha way..
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how the guys who groped Shikamaru and tried to kill Neji are now their 'family'. Of course, the bigger issue is what's important.
You tell a good story.
You tell a good story.
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It seems that the tension with the old Uchihas is little by little disappearing thanks the intelligent movements of Sasuke, good for him.
Choza and Inoichi are Chouji and Ino parents, if my memory doesn't fail. Are you planning to bring them and the rest of the gang in the fic? That would be a good number. Maybe planning a mother-ship? Or another ship with a secondary crew? I see a lot of possibilities there, jeje.
Cheers!
Choza and Inoichi are Chouji and Ino parents, if my memory doesn't fail. Are you planning to bring them and the rest of the gang in the fic? That would be a good number. Maybe planning a mother-ship? Or another ship with a secondary crew? I see a lot of possibilities there, jeje.
Cheers!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved Iruka in this chapter! I just can't describe it though ^^;;;
I hope that they will become part of the crew too! I can only hope that Iruka will beable to help influnce it! =)
Thanks for the update!
I hope that they will become part of the crew too! I can only hope that Iruka will beable to help influnce it! =)
Thanks for the update!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it:) Naruto was incredible! Fining out how Sasuke got his loyal me wOw!!
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So they went at Shikamaru to lure out Neji. Hm...
Lots of dealing with the past in this latest chapter. Their courage at moving on is inspiring. The emotional struggle translates effectively.
The tender moment between Asuma and Kakashi will remain in my memory. It's beautiful.
Everybody is all about Naruto now: the crew, Konohamaru, etc. I wonder how this will play out in the story.
Lots of dealing with the past in this latest chapter. Their courage at moving on is inspiring. The emotional struggle translates effectively.
The tender moment between Asuma and Kakashi will remain in my memory. It's beautiful.
Everybody is all about Naruto now: the crew, Konohamaru, etc. I wonder how this will play out in the story.