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schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol Asuma is so funny. I like his friendship with Kakashi :)
Will Neji ever fully admit he's a Hyuuga? Will Haku stay with them? So many questions >.>
person roro237
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm smiling as I say "Here you go spoiling me again" That was wonderful! Forgive me if I sounded like I was complaning. No other chapter left me feeling like I needed more like that last one. I love this story and where you're taking us! Plus a Satarday and Sunday update! That calls for a 'Yea Baby' Thank you ^_^
person Nivell
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Jiraiya's perverted self! Glad that the rest of the Uchiha crew accepted Naruto.
person Halskr
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you are so addicted to this have kept updating. I really like where you are taking these characters. I cant wait to see if Konohamaru joins the crew. It will be good for Naruto to see what he was like when he was cat. Although, at this rate Konohamaru is gonna have it easy or hard servicing just Ibiki and Jaraiya.

I am hoping that Haku stays. I want him to be reunited with his love, but I will miss him when he leaves the crew. Are they going to move to a mother ship? I dont imagine the Silver leaf can hold many more people. You have really given us an idea of it size. I just got the impression that it wasn't that big of a ship.

Now if I have this right. Sasuke is wearing his mother's ring and his father's while Naruto is wearing a ring that originally belonged to Jaraiya? Or is Sasuke wearing his mom's while Naruto is wearing Sasuke's dad's?

Thank for writing and sharing this.
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"That Sasuke-san is like saying a blackhole is badly lit" best line of the whole chapter...a great chapter once again...thank you for another quick update...I love the weekend because I know you will be updating almost daily on Friday,Sat, and Sun...LOVE IT!!
person vb
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loooooove this story!!! LOVE IT!!!!!
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I applaud the way Naruto handled the situation. Shika's so hot he can start a war ^_^
person Colette
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I'm here, making use of the new possibilities ;)
I was so expecting this chapter and the meeting! You have given us just a little of it, but it only have increased my curiosity, jeje. In addition, Konohamaru point of view, as an outsider of the crew, was interesting.
And now, the ashamed confession: it wasn't until Asuma and Konohamaru appearances that I didn't remember that Hiruzen was the surname of Sarutobi, the Sadaime Hokage. A question related to it, Asuma isn't here his son as he is in the original? See you soon!


person cynaga
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hang on your every wonderful word. =)
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
1. Was it Fugaku who gave the ring to Jiraiya?

2. Stop looking at Shikamaru's arse. That belongs to Neji.

3. Oh, hell no--they went after Shikamaru?

4. Naruto is the friggin' MAN.

5. Mannah, watch your tenses.

6. I love you for pumping these chapters out so fast.