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Ah Naru chan has grown up to be such a protector. What a clifhanger for me, but I guess they did right, respect the unknown.

I loved it! But I felt like this chapter was over to soon,cut off. Ok you have spoiled me and I'm having trouble with a short chapter sorry:) I'll go back and reread it and that way it will be twice as long!(no giggling at that) I love your story read you next time ^_^

I'm very upset that you have me checking this site constantly for updates on this universe of yours and the crew you have created...I have a job y'know...unbelievable writing, a storyline that is incredibly exciting, and characters that I want desperately to meet and talk to...I love books, I love reading, I love authors that pull you in..shake you up..and then never let you go..I would buy your books based on this story alone..I don't even want to think about what I'll do when this fiction of yours ends...Thanks ever so much for giving it to us. :)

What happened to Kisame?

And I hope that Haku and Zabuza join the crew and I loved the way that Naruto handled the problem!

Thanks for the update! =)

Ooh, you brought in Asuma! I like the guy..and was Konohamaru such a brat that he and Sasuke didn't get along with each other? I can just imagine it..

nice thing to wake up to lol this tale is just rolling right along for you im glad for the fast updates and im also glad that your still posting this for us to in joy as its a very good tale

okay really i can spell just supper tired after my organic chem test this week...here we go again...I wish some one would do art work for this chapter so we could see what the uniforms look like and see Suke and Naru decked out in their fine jewels....and then Post it on y gall or deviant art....okay so that is my wish....anywho great chapter...can't wait to see who the others that Hiruzen is talking about are...

see i did it again...supper instead of super....gosh I need to take a break and go to bed...yikes sorry I just have to put in my two cents about how much i like this fic, to keep you motivated hopefully it's working...tee hee...sorry about the spelling errors...chuck it up to tired neurons...

Ah, Sasuke. You are the man.

Mannah, thank you for updating again so quickly. I have developed something of a habit for this fic. It will be an unfortunate day when you post its final chapter.

WoW!! It just keeps on getting better:) You did a great job describing the uniforms. I could see them! The way you have added everyone. The newest Asuma and Konohamaru wOw I love it! The way you have been up dating this calls for a 'Yea Baby' I'm loven it ^_^