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person nivell
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it when Naruto gets all possessive over Sasuke especially during sex...his "howls" are so hot!
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*tackleglompeat* very well done there are very few things that hold me to this site and this is one of them so again thank you for being willing to share your talent with those of us with no talent
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto howling is so hot XD I love it, it's just sexy lol Neji needs to open up.
Is Shino going to be lonely?
person roro237
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto was so grown up and I just love that:) This is such a great story. ^_^
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your muses just won't leave you alone, will they?
person nivell
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great to see that things between Neji and Shika are working out! Baby steps are fine with me!
person roro237
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story:) Forgive me for not reading it sooner. I'm hooked! ^_^
person roro237
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a new comer to your story but I have enjoyed every word I've read. For me it's your story and you putting your spin on the characters is fine:) I hope you will finish all of it! I'm hooked and I would love to know what you have in mind to the end ^_^
person roro237
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The battle was magnificent! I loved Sasuke view on his head judgement and heart:)
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All right Neji! Shikamaru is a lucky man; he has Naruto for a friend, Sasuke for a boss and now Neji for...whatever else. I'm so glad that Neji had the presence of mind to listen to what Naruto had to say. And I love how everyone is treating him as though he is a Hyuga, even though he has staunchly denied it to Sasuke, but he still isn't balking about it.

You updated this so quickly I almost missed it! You're going to be staring at 60 chapters of a fic at this rate (not that I'm complaining, mind you)!

Your AU is wonderful. I love science fiction but I don't think I have the skill to write it. I'm living vicariously through your efforts, you should know that.

I note that Shino is quite the cheerleader in this fic, very free with advice and compliments. What's going to happen to him now that Shikamaru and Neji are devoted to each other? I hate to think of Shino being a third wheel, I love his character so much.

I am also wondering about Zabuza and Haku.