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schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
XD this made me happy.
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWW I love you...(no not that way you perverts *___*)

I loved this chapter...let me tell you the ways..
1. The fact that you portrayed Naru as such an insightful friend, and the way that you had him explain how his experiences had changed him, and that he was stronger for them.

2. I really like that you are taking your time to develop these characters and that we get a deeper glimpse of what makes them who they are in each subsequent chapter.

3. I love that you make being a genius frightening in all reality Shika and Sasuke and Neji should be feared for their incredible intelligence as much as Naruto, Kakashi and Ibiki should be feared for their strength both of these qualities are indespensable in battle

4. But my very favorite part was that you have your Neji vulnerable as well as strong, I love that he is going beyond his fear to trust Shika in a realtionship, even if he knows there is a risk to get hurt he sees that Shika is worth the risk. I also love that Shika the horn dog is willing to take it slow with Neji...now if that is not true love...I don't know what is.
person roro237
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Naruto looking out for his bestfriend was so sweet. I truly love your spin on the boys:) This is a awesome space crew ^_^
person cynaga
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An indecent amount of fun~!
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*tackle bite chew* yummy it was very good at you got 2 more together i like that alot thank you for updating so soon
person Kerrisa
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awee! That was so sweet! Yay for Shikamaru getting some love in life!! =D
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*claps feverishly*

I REMAIN IN AWE.

No wonder your muse was so insistent.
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating :)
That rejection by Neji was like being dropped in a cold lake >.> Totally cold rofl
I was so amazed when Shino spoke to Shika ^_^ I love Shino :)
And did Neji really like Hinata that way?
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i can hardly wait to see Neji's reaction to the Lab
person cynaga
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better and better. It's so good that it doesn't even matter to me that the characters are Naruto anymore ~ just the story is more than enough,,,