rate_review Reviews

I don't know how many readers you think you need to make this story worth writing but I'm throwing my hand in and saying I'm one. You can't just give us something this unique and different then take it away. I want to know what happens next and if it is transformed in to an original with characters I don't care about I won't be following it because I'll be too sad and angry that is story is gone. So please continue writing this fanfic. PLEASE!!!

Okay so after I read over the review I left it kinda sounded a bit preachy to me so I'm changing it *blushes*...so yeah even if you took weeks or longer I would still follow this fiction, but only as you are writing it now and not if you go back to having the characters be all the way they are written in the Manga...cuz seriously I like the way your characters behave nothing wrong with them being Out Of Character who cares if you say they will be then we should expect it...so there off the preachy box...sorry...Still reading...

Hmm, in response to your musings on creating an original fic, why don't you finish writing this one in the style of Naruto and then just go back and change the names and features and tweak the storyline? Take it to different places that you couldn't take it to before because you were limited by keeping in character. This storyline would make an excellent erotic sci-fi novel. Think of this one as pratice, or a trial run, after all if you can't finish this, what chance do you have with an original story? Would be excellent as a manga, don't you think? Loving the way you developed the Naruto characters, more believable than the original Naruto.

Well keep up the good work, I look forward to which ever direction you choose to take this fic.

Au revoir,
Zannie

First, I registered just to leave a review for you. Second, I like to read in the evenings to unwind, as a result I have read a lot of fanfiction and your's is in my top five. I have read very few published books that are this good. Don't worry if the characters are OOC, through your writing you have almost made them your own. Not once have I thought 'That's not Sasuke' or 'Shikamaru should be more lazy'. You should definitely finish. Even if the updates are slower, I'll still read your work.

I don't mind if the characters are au. About your question about maturity levels, being a spacer will do that. Spacers live a hard life. Sasuke was being raised his whole life to be a leader, and never realized his brother killed his family. So that angst factor is gone.

I would read your story even if you updated slowly but I must confess that I visit aff everyday just to see your updates. I love this story so much!

just the thought of the Sasuke from the manga doing mending to pass the time is funny but take him from that and put him in this world and it fits

Sasuke as a girl, hmm. It's sexy jutsu!!! He would kinda look like Hinata wouldn't he.

I hope they all make it to the ship alive and well.

Excellent story. I like the world you've created, and how you've moved the characters from a ninja setting to a scifi setting.

I like that you've created a greater world for this AU, but not tried to explain it to the reader in one hit -- it's part of the plot and the story line, but fascinating to click more piece of the world into place.

Great work, I'm looking forward to more.