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person Kerrisa
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haku started off as a such a jerk but things have progressed so well! Well, minus being separated from their crew. I feel so bad for poor Neji =( but I look forward to him finding a new home on the Silver Leaf! I'm looking forward to the next update! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're so awesome here I was all set and ready for ass kicking Sasuke and you pull a fast one and give me cross dressing Sasuke playing Neji's wife...That was brilliant...Like I said I never really can tell where the plot will twist and it makes things interesting.

I feel sorry for Neji I wonder if he had a thing for Hinata, and I trully hope he doesn't fall in love with the littlest Uchiha, I'm glad Haku told him he was taken already.

Haku is so awesome in this chappie too, maybe he and Zabusa will stay with the flying leaf? Who knows great stuff though, update soon.
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haku, Sasuke and Neji?!

Oh my...
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Things I loved about this chapter
1. Bad ass Sasuke finally makes an appearance...Yeah the one that can kick some serious ass using brains and grace.

2.Naruto he sounds so yummy in this chapter all long legged and buff..yum

3.Haku finally admitting why he is so angry with Sasuke(and Itachi and his chocolate feeding fetish is just creepy as hell, poor Haku)

4. Neji...yeah cuz even with short hair he is just so deliciously sexy...hope he and Shika get together forget ShikaRin...ShikaNeji...FTW
person Dragon7
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Na-chan, come to my comforting bosom! *glomps Naruto* Lolz.

Okay, so Haku stepped it up this time... I hope. *puts away sharps objects* Lolz, but he's still a punk. Get over yourself, already! Lolz.

Amazing, as always. I just love your style of writing. Can't wait for the next one though.

Excited,
Kiki-Chan
person Halskr
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, lots to review on. Poor Kisame went back to the freak. At least he is still alive, but he probable gonna be in for it from Itachi when he catches up to him. To bad Itachi is stark raving loony.

I really hope Haku doesn't sell Sasuke down the river. You get the impression that Haku can be a manipulative little bastard when he is angry.

Poor Naruto, he really is feeling miserable about what happen, but I think it is probably a good thing. Sasuke needs to know that he can stand on his own and that he can make decisions. Up to this point, he has had the crew to fall back on if he makes a mistake. Its kinda like he got thrown from the nest. Plus it will show Naruto there is more to protecting Sasuke than just being a body guard.

Anyway thanks for the massive updates.
person nivell
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you have Neji in this fic!! Will he be a cat too? I hope Haku doesn't try to betray Sasuke. I found the image of Itachi feeding a Haku dressed up as Sasuke hilarious! He's psycho but at least he still loves his brother.
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
now THAT is a twist Neji-kun with out the long hair lol
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i see pictures of Neji joining the crew and now im not going to sleep couse i have to know and you probly will not tell us for another 2 or 3 chapters but damn your good it always flows like smooth silk or a fine wine keep it coming and ill keep eatting it up