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schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, when I was first reading this, I wasn't entirely sure about it. Then I went ahead and read the second chapter. Then the third. Then the fourth. And the.. I think you get it.

This is so well thought out and amazing that if you had written this with all original characters and published it, I would have bout a copy... O r ten.

Update soon because this is just so well written and that is hard to find.

Keep up the great work!
Kiki-Chan
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please save Haku...He's too sweet to die...

I guess Sasuke will be training hard to kill his brother....so sad that Tachi always ends up being the crazy bastard I like him better as the over protective brothe, but he does play one mean SOB in the AU world.

Thanks for giving us Sasuke's point of view I liked reading Kisame's point of view too, but we did need to know what was going through Suke's mind when his Naru was about to die.
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope Haku makes it :)
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG Jiraiya and Naruto!

I hope they can save Haku.
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
and the knife twists deep very well done sorry i havent commented on the last few chapters but they all mess very well
person Kerrisa
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Go Rin!!! You can do it!!! Save Haku!! Itachi .... ugh. 'Nuff said. Loved this chapter =) I really hope they save Haku! And damn you update fast... or maybe it just seems like it cuz I just finished reading your fic... what.. yesterday? The day before? Anywho! Awesome awesome update, I love how Kisame was there for Sasuke both in the past and in the present he didn't survive. XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person RyuEarth
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the update! =)
person Halskr
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow you really feel bad for Kisame and Haku. I think Itachi has really lost his marbles here thats how it come across anyway. Thanks for the update.
person Kerrisa
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WTH!?!? What a dirty crummy sleeze ball of a cheater! I'm pretty sure Itachi just killed Haku! Agh!! What a douche bag!!

But yay for Kisame doing what he did, even though it was kind of sad that he had to die in the process =/

I just started reading this today =D A couple of... six hours!?!? Have I really been reading that long!?!? No way, can't be. Let's see.. American Idol came on... but I was already reading around 7... I stopped to make dinner, and the dessert... well, I guess I have been here for awhile. O_O

Well, i love this story!! The whole premise, the set up, the plot, shweee!! Makes me happy and excited! I think you're doing a really great job with this! I did notice that in the chapters where Rin was first introduced, I think she was called "Jin" by Naruto, and then the name Jin popped uo a few more times afterward.

I'm pissed at Itachi, I hope that by some miracle they are able to save Haku (or non-Haku =o) the crew needs a cat!

XOXOXs Kei-Chan
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Itachi did that. All those rules about engagement and challenge and then he hands over a corpse as the prize? I'm counting on Rin to revive him. Please? Then again, no ZabusaxHaku...maybe he wouldn't be a good cat. Their ship has such bad luck with cats.

I really love this fic. I have a fetish for the 'cat equals uke' concept, in just about any setting. I also really like the way sex is casual for the most part. No "he falls in love with the one who takes his virginity because sex is just so darn special" cliche. The scenes with Jiraiya and Sasuke made me creepily uncomfortable, so I'm glad Naruto isn't servicing him. That pairing always gave me the squicks. I adore Iruka as queen, mother, and lover to Kakashi. I get the fangirl squeels at the thought of Shino and Shikamaru "helping" each other out in the absence of a cat. That's one of my OTPs that simply doesn't exist in fanfiction since it's such a farfetched match. The smut scene with Naruto and Sasuke was great, especially the aftermath. Jealous possessive Naruto is my favorite kind. I'm very interested in the technical details of space travel in this fic, the talk about what sounds like an actual fleet somewhere in their future (if all goes well). And, again, I love the concept of the cat. Like cabin boys, earning their way. The fact that Sasuke had to start as a cat, despite being bad at it, instead of getting an instant promotion because of his status. And I like how other crews challenge for the cat. It's all so plausible. Thank you for sharing this.