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person Anon
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So sad that Haku had to die...I loved the part where Naruto kisses Sauske's wrist that was such a sweet moment. This raises so many questions for the Silver Leaf crew and I wonder what happened to Itachi to make him evil? I love the way you are weaving this tale...another great chapter.
person nivell
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Itachi, you bitch!!!! OMG poor Kisame...poor Haku!! And poor Zabuza..
person RyuEarth
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No! DX
I thought that Genma was still alive! I take back everything that I said about him before! T_T
Poor Genma! And poor Kisame and Haku! I hope that Zabuza can do something! =/
Thanks for the update!
person RyuEarth
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! O.O
I wished that Rin had gotten slapped! And I hope that Genma dies for betraying them like that!
But Shino equals a hottie here! XD
Thanks for teh update! ^^
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg you killed Haku, you bastard <--- souh park moment ^_^
Itachi is a real fruit basket :/ I can't wait for the deeper story :) I'm loving it so far.
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, is that Itachi a sore loser or what? Haku did not have to die that way.

Poor Zabuza.
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that was not Haku-kun i for one am hopeing to find Haku-kun else were in this lovely universe you have made
person nivell
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, does this mean that Genma is dead?? Wow, this is getting more and more interesting!
person Halskr
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I am huge fan of space adventure and sci fi. Throw in the Naruto crew and it combines both my favorite things anime and science fiction. It took along time to find this though since you have it posted in the au section. I almost never check that board. I am glad I did. I thought they were gonna run into Orochimaru first but Itachi works too. Thanks for the double update.

Hal-skr
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!! You are a fantastic author. Your writing style is really good. I can't wait to see what happens with the challenge.
Update soon!