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schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh now THAT is a twist lol i like it ill be waiting and may re-read the whole thing just to make sure i missed nothing
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, great. Is Naruto going to have to kill Genma and Itachi now? I tell you when it rains it pours.

This is getting REALLY interesting. How many chapters of this do you anticipate?
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man what a chapter...

Things I loved: The easy way that Naruto delt with Rin and how he let her down easy..fingering his controller what the hell was she thinking really??

The way Naruto behaved with the children and how that was important to Sasuke

But what I loved the most was that Itachi is alive and well, and about to challange Naruto for his 'Suke...and how did I know that Genma was a big fat traitor???....Poor Sasuke is going to have to endure such bad things from Itachi if he is taken, and I can't imagine Naruto surviving that separation....can't wait to read more...I won't ask you to update soon because you gave us 3 chappies in two days, and I've never been one to beg, but well...hell...I guess I will Update again soon please and thank you!
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm 1 out of 12 but only know were 4 are nice ill be waiting for the next chapter
person cynaga
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens . . . deliciously.

Do I read echoes of Loveless here?
person cynaga
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully unique and well written AU. I am enjoying your economy of words which manage to say so much. Please continue this fic for a long time~! Thanks. =)
person Sylvir
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Usually I don't go for AU stories that are this far out but I took a chance on this one. I'm really really excited about reading more. My only suggestions are that some of your futuristic space inventions should be given more description and explinations. Also the constant use of the word 'prick' is getting annoying.
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
and that is how it should always be but saddly its not always like that in real life which is one reason i love this tale so much it show how things should be
person nivell
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! This was what I wanted so badly to happen! It's great that Naruto got to fuck Sasuke.
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm amused at your lack of reviews. Is it because of your title? It definitely ISN'T because of the writing, you've got yourself a qualified hit here. I have paid money for books that were far less interesting.

I am, like you, both a fan of science fiction and of Naruto, and I am delighted to see them combined in your story. I am following this closely and look forward to your updates.