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This story is amazing to read and going through the last chapter i was sure it was going to end. So I"m very happy you are going to continue. I would suggest starting again from chapter 1. 92 chapters is already pretty epic and with when I was a new reader I had reservations about the story when I saw it was 40 chapters.

Damn Aff and their selfishness!!! I want to give you a five star rating every week! Why won't they allow me that one simple pleasure?!

YEA - Shika papa san~!

I was almost as excited as when I gave brith! I wanted to know what the kits would look like. You covered everything! I truly loved it!! Of course Haru would be the one who had to eat alone first:) I sure didn't see it coming that Shi-chan would feel this way?! But that ever lovin Na-chan made it right. Have I mention I'm in love with Naruto to you:) Yea and Sasuke to I can't fight it any longer:) This is the first Naruto story I have read with 90 chapters 'Yea Baby'!!! Thank you for all your hard work ~bowing~ I love Your story!

OMFG someone needs to FAN ART Shikamaru holding his genetic soup made with Naruto and Sasuke! It's unbelievable!!!!

When I saw you posted I felt real joy at knowing that the babies would be born. I think it's amazing to have been drawn into the world you created to be excited like I was. The babies are interesting and I look forward to seeing them as they grow into themselves and seeing how you handle the challenge of everyone raising the kids with the kits. I'm also happy for Shikimaru.

Hi there, just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your story. it's a very original and interesting concept. Hopefully you will continue with it. Cheers.

Chapter 84 in this chapter I had a sense of passing of time towards the end. I'm not sure how much time passed, but I definitely had that sense. I think the reference to the three-day mark along with the short list of things that were happening were the chief cause of that effect.

Chapter 85 I'm guessing it was the security drill part that you had left out? Considering your concentration on character missing a plot point like that seems likely. If that was the case maybe you should consider an outline?

Chapter 86 I always wondered if I read too deeply into situations? Was the fact that Inari not having his own room enough of a pressing concern that it perhaps might hant at the situation with him and Konohamaru or was it just a offhanded comment? Anyway, one thing that did shake me as strange was that several individuals took time off to work on their own quarters when the nursery was still incomplete. One is a pressing concern while the other is a matter of convenience, which makes me wonder that perhaps they are not as close to everyone else as I thought they were. Then again I was pretty sure that only two maybe three days had passed during this chapter.