rate_review Reviews

my favorite things

1. the brother hug...thank you for that. i love your sasu he is so forgiving and he still loves his aniki..loved it.
2. the fact that inari is realising he wants konohamaru for a friend much more than a lover...this happens in real life too....we experiment with friends, we try a relationship it doesn't work, we move on....and the idea of kono-kun with one of the kits in the future...wooot gets me all excited.
3. the private bathroom....sasuke gets to keep his fluffy soft naruto all for himself no one else should see fluffy soft naruto, just like no one else should see sasuke's face in ecstasy. i loved this gift for them.

so yeah i've said LOVED IT like 700 times or whatever...but I LOVED IT....so yeah!

chapter 82 I liked the beginning of this chapter. It's a classic setup. However, I have to wonder if they want to create a servant that would never be able to bead anyways then why allow them to reach puberty and if that couldn't be stopped at all why not just have them be sterile as inactive? I mean sex could be a real distraction to a soldier. The last part of the chapter was amusing. Actually this whole chapter had a bit more levity to it than usual which was nice.

Chapter 83 I'm guessing I'm alone in thinking cloning your mother is 10 ways of creepy. You really are handling an interesting subject here. Should one punish someone for a crime they can't remember committing? What is the purpose of punishment? Is it to keep society in some form of structure or does one have a legitimate obligation to the victims? What weight counterbalances sin?

I love this story, I love this concept, I love that you take a slightly different approach on couples in that you have so many types and varieties and that there is focus on them and their individual problems but there is a strong focus on the goal of creating a new Uchia so that the reader isn't overwhelmed by fluff. I really have loved the arch focusing on the kids and cubs and I am excited about them coming. The idea of a mama Naruto fox is cute, granted you hinted that Sasuke might use the feeder. I was also interested in reading about Hinata and seeing our old friend try some of his tricks.

SQUEE!!!

BABY SHOWER!!!!!

Ok wOw you have out did youself again! Back to back chapter with so much happening!! That was alot of people and emotions going on!!! Queen spacer you are the best:) From intense to amazing. I couldn't have imagined what the feeder would be like. But that vest is perfect:) Haku is just full of surprises?! I love it, his help with the babies will be envalueable:) All the gifts were wonderful. Especially the bath. You know I have to say it 'Yea Baby':)

I liked Choza in this chapter! =)

Chapter 71 The Blossom was tiny, fast, manoeuvrable and bristled with weaponry. maneuverable?

So I'm guessing this was the end to an arc and it seemed sort of rush to me. Well, it's more the plan went off without a hitch which kind of feel disappointing.

Chapter 72 being able to signal like that when that's happening is impressive. I'm curious did you borrow it from history or come up with that on your own?

Chapter 74 why no line breaks? Anyway Kiba's actions caught me by surprise as much judging from your author's note as they did you. It is interesting how stories take on a life their own at times, though, and I wonder if there wasn't something deeper behind your sudden change? Are you enjoying writing this?