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I simpl LOVE this story it's seems so awsome continues asap!
Please! From what I've seen your a top of the line writer!

I loved loved LOVED the beginning! Captured my interest right away. The descriptions are detailed and the story plot is new and refreshing. I'm so excited to read the next chapter. You have me hooked!

Hmm, this looks really interesting and the way you write humanKisame makes me want to rape him. LOl. The numbers that represent your author's notes is quite annoying because it distracts my attention away from the action. I'd suggest just putting in your author's notes at the end because almost everybody reads it anyways.

Very cool concept! Vivid details and a great plot!

Wow! This is an amazing start to a new fic! Your description of the summoning process & bonding is so vivid it's like I am seeing a movie! Great job & can't wait to read more!

That was AMAZING!! First thing i read when I got up this morning. I am so excited!! I loved Everything!! The rules of the game, Naruto as a badass demon xD *squeal of delight* I just hope Sasuke takes back the reigns and puts his demon er, guardian, in place. As much as I think it would be fun for big bad ol' Naruto to be lil 10 year old Sasuke's master, I think the story would be that much stronger if Sasuke did regain his control, which I'm thinking he will once the bonding bite/mark thing wears off and he realizes his guardian tried to kill his mother and brother. I don't think he's going to appreciate that too much =/ And Yay for Iruka and Kakashi showing up on the scene!!! I'm all kinds of jumping all over the place to see how quickly Kakashi settles things because you know he will xD Lol poor sick Iruka, he wants to sleep, I really don't think he'd let Kakashi draw it out even if he wanted to xD I love love love love this story and look forward to the next update!!! XOXOXs Kei-chan~

I love you so much for writing this! The whole situation/environment you've created is absolutely wonderful! I'm a sucker for supernatural/fantasy and the demon thing is pretty exciting. (I love how Kisame is Itachi's demon and Itachi's little daydream at the ceremony...KisaIta is my guilty pleasure XD) I can't wait to see how the plot unfolds/I hope you update this soon! I hope that my excessive use of exclamation marks and general fangirling don't annoy you too much...but reading this really made my day.

Very nice, a taste of Saiyuki with the limiters. I'm sure TAchi wont' be happy to find that Naru is the dom and I like the fact that they are a mix of Kyu and Naruto. If you have an update list can you add me please? Thank you

Oh my gosh, this is a multichaptered fic?????? For me?????? *SQUEALS WITH JOY* I am so freaking excited! I love the setup you have here. I can't wait to find out more, more about what happens next, more about Kyuubi's past, more about the bond they've established... Do demons and their Summoners always have a sexual relationship? What happened with Minato? Is Kyuubi the supreme demon or something? This makes me so happy!!!! Thank you so very, very much!!!

This is fantastic so far. I love the whole concept and Iruka as headmaster is perfect (even though that caught me off guard - it's fitting). I can't wait to see where you take this.