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person silversauce
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thanks a lot for letting me know you have this side story! it was really enlightening! and scary lol
kushina is insane

anyway ill review with more later but its 3am here so im tired and can barely think straight
i'll be back >:D
person Lonelulaby
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP MONGER!!!!!! I really don't know what to say. Did Naruto give Minato THE mating mark or just a mark, sweet baby jesus, the shiot is about to hit the fan. I love you like a fat kid loves cake. I don't really know if I want Naruto to find Minato anymore though, after reading this. My inner me is panicking right now. I know I'm rambling and GAH! thanks for telling me about this cause I would have never known about the side story till a couple of weeks. Jeez, can't wait for more Naru/Sasu.

ja ne till next time and keep up the awesomesauce
person mika17
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I've reviewed before, just thought I'd do it again since I just re-read chapter 8, even though I had realized that it wasn't actually an update. Again, it was really good stuff, I love the conflict you've put Sasuke and Iruka in. This pulling of Naruto in two ways opens up do many options, I love it. Also, please put me on your email list, my email is: mikako17@gmail.com
person mika17
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I love how you portray the dark, delicious feelings of jealousy and hurt in this chapter. Thank you so much for putting so much effort into this. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God fucking dammit I have waited a LOOOONG time for this little bad boy to be updated. And by God was it worth the wait. I now get the joy of dreaming about this fic tonight, of a legal Sasuke getting ravenged by Naruto, yes, these dreams shall be enjoed thoroughly.
You are magic with words, and I can't bloody wait for the next update. I wonder if Naruto will actually be able to go through with killing Minato. I also wonder if Sasuke will be able to just stand by idly as Naruto goes to kill Minato. Either way, I bow down to you and your plot bunnies and offer up virtual carrots for the bunnies and incentive for you to figure out what happens next and how you are indeed, going to top this latest chapter.
person Donnita
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I've been keeping up with it for quite awhile and I am surely looking forward to another chapter. I do hope itachi's complex for his brother isn't too extreme lol. Also I hope Sasuke learns to tame naruto somehow, or as much as he can anyways. But then again demons are more powerful and its kinda crazy how the humans wield so much power over them. Update soon plez and thnks for taking it off of hiatus.
person Lil_lo
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was writing a quick note since I haven't been able to review. For a while I didn't have a computer and I currently work and have side projects so much that I haven't had a chance to reread where I left off to get caught up. I know you work really hard and few people review. I don't know if I will review here or on ff.net but I am trying to catch back up and add my support again.
person Rc
schedule August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I adore the universe you created here!!
person Alex
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first of all.... YAAAY U LIIIVE!!! *brings out the choir* ôHAAAAALLELUJAAAAAH♫ lol okay. I'm with glow-in-the-dark ^^^ I saved ur profile on my faves and every once in a while I would check for an update n then curse u out in my head lol if I read your an correctly, this is one of the stories that you will be constantly updating, yes? I sure hope so. You have an amazing imagination! And the fact that you can put into words what you see in your minds eye is amazing. You are very talented indeed ^_^ Keep up the good work... or else I will somehow find you and kill you in a horribly painful way... then I will resurrect you, only to torture you until you die, then resurrect you again. That way you can finish the story... How's that for a "veiled" threat? lol
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was deliciously long!! A lovely surprise indeed. I'm always keeping an eye on your profile to see if you've got any updates and was beyond happy to see that you've updated this one. I like how Naruto has never been in his human form until the limiters were put on him. And I like how he is wearing the death note around his neck now. All the little details you've put in just make everything more believable and add that extra dimension to them. Job very well done XD