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person darkestheart02
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story and it's originality. I hope you will continue it soon. I can't write much :3 here my cellphone is acting up! But still great story. Continue doing well!

Darkestheart~
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!! Though...Minato/Kyuubi are a biiiiiig second to Naruto/Sasuke :)Hope to see more chapters soon and thank you!!!
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If you make a sequel i will love you forever! I mean this story ire really great and i love the dynamics between the characters!
person Akira
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok, so is the third time i try to post a review but the page wont work with me,
so i will make it short now because my other attemps were long and is frustrating re-write all over again...

So, I found your story when you were starting it, but because this website dosent work with alerts i lost it
i was unable to find it and the i completely forgot, and just yesterday i found it again because it appears
in the first page, the tittle ringed a bell and after reading again the first chappie i remembered> it was a nice
surprise to find now that you have 7 LONG chappies, i enjoy reading them all and i hope not lose this story again.

keep working, you have a brilliant mind and this story shows it.
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi :) I've been thinking of reviewing this fib for a while... but was too darned lazy ^^'. Love the plot and naru's outfits :). Also which convention did u go to? Today im heading off to my third day of AVCON 2012 in adelaide south australia.
Keep up the good work :)
person Lonelylulaby
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if those moths about Naruto are true, did he really survive without a master for so long before Minato? And does he truly remember his past or just pieces when he's sleeping? Just keeps getting better. I have to go back and read to see what the other rules were sorta forgot. I just love those quotes you have at the beginning of every chapter. Gah, I hope this is one of the stories that makes the cut too, cuz I'm going to need something to get me through school lol.

Ja ne till next time and keep up the fantabulos job
person Lonelylulaby
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I re-read the last chapter and every time Naruto calls Sasuke Poppet I think of Kim Harrison's 'The Hollows' series and how her demon is British. I imagine Naruto dressed up with a spectacle, pocket watch and coat. Makes me chuckle, any who I laughed when Ebisu got dropped kicked through the portal mirror. Are they really going to bind most of Naruto's power? Sasuke has had a horrible night.

Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you will update soon this is absolutely the most ingenious way of a fan fic i have ever seen i mean there are somany factors and your hook was great! I'm so happy I stopped to read this i mean this story is really amazing. If you do update i will be here to read it if not than i will be a sad cookie.
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're back! And I'm hoping you'll stay. I was on fanfiction(dot)net and saw that you'd moved DHTMF and had gotten excited thinking you'd updated, but was surely disappointed when I found out that, that wasn't the case at all...

I love DHTMF and hope to see your next update soon.
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for letting its know. Looking forward to your update.