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schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am glad you updated. I can't wait to find out what going to happen with the counsel.
person Zay
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot! One thing i didn't understand in the last chapter was why when u were writing from Naruto / Kyuubi's perspective he kept being refered to as Kyuubi? Was this a typo, or is he sopposed to partly think of himself as Kyuubi? I understand why you'd call him that from Iruka, kakashi, etc perspective or during conversations but it seems odd. Especially since Naruto / Kyuubi keeps insisting he be refered to as Naruto? Anyway, loved it, please keep up the good work!!!
person Lack_Honesty
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An update, yay! Anyway, I find the whole discussion about Iruka's lack of judgement very enlightening, I was close to give my whole support to Itachi's reprimands if not for Kakashi and his insight of how Itachi's behavior is as influenced by emotions as that of Irukas's. Thanks Kakashi, and I also found heartwarming the thought of Kakashi protecting young Iruka, The mystery of Minato's dead weight heavy on Naruto, but I found that on one paragraph he referred to himself as Kyuubi, maybe I'm wrong but it made for an inconsistency that I could not overlook after he stressed his new Name to Kakashi. I wish to find in future chapters Sasuke's involvement increased for he has yet to do something different from being a quivering needy mass of human pup, not that I don't find the image appealing when in consideration of an almighty demon Naruto hovering over him. Thanks for the heads up about the update.
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sukenarufan09 here under a different penname....yeah i had to change my pen name to my 2 OTP names to reflect my love for all things Kaname Zero related.

anyway on to my review....the wait was so worth it....who cares how long it takes to put out a chapter when it is of this quality? so thank you for not giving up on the story, those of us who are hooked on it are very thankful.

i totally loved chibi ruka naming his demon, and kyuubi/naruto are just so deliciously wicked that i can't wait to see what kind of changes the beautifully inocent sasucakes will bring to this being! looking forward to so much more.
person IvvyMoon
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, stupid AFF totally ate my review. I don't even remember everything I said now. *pouts*

But this chapter had so much going on, and now this latest development! Poor Naruto and Sasuke. Not much time has gone by since Naruto was summoned, but it's all been crazy. I'm really curious, however, what's going to happen as they develop their relationship, especially when Sasuke gets older. Looking forward to the next update!
person chey
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I would love to read the next CH. and I love how the story makes sasuke so cute!
person Lil_lo
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was excellent! I'm so glad for the in-depth gut wrenching back story that lead up to Iruka trying beef up the survival rate of summoners beginning to summon (I do and I don't know why I mentally went on a tangent about getting eaten on the 1st try but I'm glad you didn't take it there...)

I really got into the fight ans loved how the back story and where Naruto came from adds to the psychotic frenzied feel that Naruto brings. I can't being to wonder why the Kyuubi goes on with the he's mine and if he really killed Minato. And I feel like I need to re-review 1 because I found Iruka and Kakashi's entrance to be quite a great scene even countered by the power Kakashi and Iruka had to back the entrance up.

I also loved the stab you gave at canon when you had Mikoto go on about the slaying. I actually love every single character except Fugaku who really shouldn't leave his family with how intense attacks get against him. I can't help but wonder what would have happened had they had died or Sasuke immediately got up possessed and flinging around powers or anything!
person Lil_lo
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and the idea of Naruto just effing up the summoning in a storm of demonic supremacy and lust. Itachi, Kisame and Mikoto are interesting and spirited and I love the idea of the dread they'll feel having Naruto there slyly trying to corrupt Sasuke...unless Iruka can fix things.

I feel kind of mean for thinking this, but if the then Kyuubi killed Minato because of a summoning (it's not explicitly explained as of yet how he died)then I really don't feel sorry for him and feel like really Iruka what are you going to do about it. I guess I feel like the world they live in allows if not encourages these kid summoners to try and grab a demon that you know is dangerous etc. While it's sad for the few who die so that all of society doesn't die when demons overrun them, you intentionally gave a dangerous thing a pathway into the world, you knew it was dangerous, hell your family and teachers were standing around watching with the hope you could do it,sucks to be you if you die.
person foxykasumi
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!! Please update soon! Im so addicted this store! ^//^
person meowkuu2
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There aren't many AU fics that I like..but I'm telling this is great! I love how you factored in the Kyuubi/ Naruto bit! and what exactly did happen all those years ago with Kyuubi flipping out, seems that there's something vital misssing. *bounces* yea! uke sasuke its always nice to see a change. please update as soon as you can pretty please *puppy eyes*