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person Chillin like a villan =D
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap you neeeeeeeeeeeeed tooooooooooo continue *squeaks like a fan-girl* It's RARE!!!!!!!! When i review....soo this story, is shall i say... AWESOME PANDA DANCE!!!!!!! =D
person airmansgirl92
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wahhh!! I love this story!! Your writing style is sophisticated and fantastic, I appreciate that more than you know. And your portrayal of all the characters is really good, I'm enjoying all of them! I like how Itachi is so protective of Sasuke, I like stories when they get along. =) I thought the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke was kind of weird at first since he was so young, but I find it doesn't bother me; it just seems natural. I feel sorry for Naruto though!! Are they ever gonna find out what really happened when he was Kyuubi? And I'm ready for him and Sasuke to be together again already! Can't wait for your next update, you are aaaawesooome!!! =D
person sophie
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi my friend just gave me a link to this story and said I should read it. Having just finished all the chapters I would like to say that I realy like the diredction the story is taking, it's different in it's story to the manger which sets it appart. Looking forwards to the next chapter when ever you have time to update.

Thanks
Sophie
person IvvyMoon
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I am so sorry for taking so long to review this latest chapter! Real life is absolutely hectic right now, but I am here now, and this chapter was fascinating! So Naruto can take over Sasuke, and they're basically married? Crazy. And the whole Anko thing, everyone seems to know who Kyuubi is except Naruto. I was almost looking forward to him going crazy and killing Anko and Ibiki, lol. Oops.
person meowkuu2
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How much do I love this story...enough for me to final register after YEARS of reading and re-reading absolutely great fanfics by awesome writers! ^__^ I love your set up and how you've managed to work in some of the characteristics of Kishimoto's people into this AU world. I am wondering how you're going to show minato/kyuu pairing (if it exists?) and if you're going to add in some of the more fiendish personalities of the "Naruto" universe? Will Itachi's love for sasuke work for or against them (i.e. sauske and itachi) throughout the story? What type of person will sasuke develop into as the story progresses do to naruto/itachi or hell even the influence or dear i say neji? I look forward to reading more and hopefully seeing some of my questions answers as you continue the story ^_^.
person Nami
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor.....Uchihas XD;. I think right now I feel the sorriest for mummy and Itachi no matter how mollycoddling he is(And Kisame, whom I love, of coarse). I'd be all torn up and pissed off too ;_;. Especially since they kind of seemed to be getting jerked around by... everyone XD (though, Iruka forgetting to tell them important things from being sick was kind of funny. I don't mind it happening to them, I just hope they get some consolation for the stress eventually. Just get a good hit in).

I do like the fic, yet it's somehow stressful XD. I love seme Naruto, and possessive Naruto, and yet at the same time want someone to kick him in the balls so hard he'll be able to taste them XD. It's a weird feeling. And it was strange the biting scene. It was almost non con, or I read it as such.... non con biting... XD or something, just borderline. Ps..... I mentioned I love Kisame right? And Itachi? And the combination of the two?
person bob
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yo!
It's a bit mad i was thinkin about this story a while bk and the nt day chapter 3 :)
Im a bit of a lazy reviewer in other words i can't be arsed sometimes.
Iruka realy pisses me of in this cos he seems a bit self righteous, the fact that he hates kuuubi even tho he's been "named" and dosent remember he still blames him for minato's death tho does he have any proof that it was him?.
Also that he sent sasuke home knowin what was happenin to him and how it feels like to be parted from your demon with a bond makes me want naruto bring him down a peg or two.
I'll look out for chapter 4
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Oreo-sama. Fan-fic is mah crack and I likes me this fix.
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story! please continue!
i love the idea of the demon's proposal!
though to his mother's and his brother's eyes sasuke is too young,
more like a prisonner of naruto's power than a willing mate...
i wonder what sasuke will say once he wakes up to find naruto all bruised and bleeding....
Naruto really seems betrayed and bitter about his previous masters...
what happened between minato and kyubi?
it sure looked like the other way around, at least to iruka.
after all, kyubi was found with minato's blood on his hands. I wonder what really happened...
naruto's powers are incredible, i hope we will see him and sasuke fight together other demons!
please continue!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story reminds me a little of Lady Valtaya's story The Summoner, the premise is the same....Sasuke is a demon summoner who summons the demon Kyuubi in a cave. Except in her story Sasuke is much older and he has another summons available to him as well. I had seen your story a few times and I had not been intrigued by the title, but then I saw the number of reviews you were getting and I said I bet that is a gem under a weird title.....and I was right....I like both this and Lady V's story they are different enough that even though they share the same idea they are completely different. I'm glad I stopped by to take a peek because now I am hooked....can't wait for more.