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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Totally love it. I can't get enough, did you know that this story is the only reason why I check AFF everyday? Just to see if you've updated?.....Yeah....creepy right? Hahahah
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update!
I'm really liking this whole mark/bond thing...it's really sweet even if in a rather morbid way as Sasuke watches Naruto get tortured. I love how emotional Sasuke gets XD
Aw, and Itachi being all jealous and big-brotherly made me smile.
And yes, I'd still like to believe that Naruto is innocent...not in a pure, rainbows-and-butterflies way but that he isn't just some cruel, inhumane monster, even if he may have some sadistic tendences XD (Which are acutaly quite sexy :P)
I look forward to reading more, as always!
I'm really liking this whole mark/bond thing...it's really sweet even if in a rather morbid way as Sasuke watches Naruto get tortured. I love how emotional Sasuke gets XD
Aw, and Itachi being all jealous and big-brotherly made me smile.
And yes, I'd still like to believe that Naruto is innocent...not in a pure, rainbows-and-butterflies way but that he isn't just some cruel, inhumane monster, even if he may have some sadistic tendences XD (Which are acutaly quite sexy :P)
I look forward to reading more, as always!
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Waaa! This is one of the best stories on AFF now!!! It's actually the ONLY reason I still come to this site! So please, please update! There has been a lot of stories about demons in the world of Naruto fanfiction, but this one is *by far* the most original.
Okay. Question time. What the heck is the family tree here? Iruka is Minato's brother, and is Naruto still Minato's son, because then Kyuubi would somehow be Iruka's...nephew...??? Or something? Because Naruto and Kyuubi are somehow connected...GAH. *is confused*
And I want to know what happened to Kyuubi and Sasuke when Anko and Ibiki were going all sadist on him! I kept reading to figure out what happened to them, and then the chapter cut off, and I didn't get to read it...
(by the way, sorry if this is really incoherent. I ended up writing half of it in another language and then having to translate it back into English... =_=;;; )
Okay. Question time. What the heck is the family tree here? Iruka is Minato's brother, and is Naruto still Minato's son, because then Kyuubi would somehow be Iruka's...nephew...??? Or something? Because Naruto and Kyuubi are somehow connected...GAH. *is confused*
And I want to know what happened to Kyuubi and Sasuke when Anko and Ibiki were going all sadist on him! I kept reading to figure out what happened to them, and then the chapter cut off, and I didn't get to read it...
(by the way, sorry if this is really incoherent. I ended up writing half of it in another language and then having to translate it back into English... =_=;;; )
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
we decided to update seperately. Ummm i think ur story is ok. im more of a sasuke fanatic so him being all
clingy doesn't suit well with me. but by all means don't change it or my homies are gonna be pissed lol
update real quick!
clingy doesn't suit well with me. but by all means don't change it or my homies are gonna be pissed lol
update real quick!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLZ DON'T TAKE DVM'S ILLITERACY AS OUR OWN. WE GRADUATED FROM COLLEGE. SO DID HE BUT HE FAILED HIS COMPUTER CLASS.
WE havin too much fun on this thing. lol!
WE havin too much fun on this thing. lol!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WooooooW I absolutely love it. How can anyone resist hot smexy demon Naruto and uber cute Sasuke
love every bit very well written.
More more more please
love every bit very well written.
More more more please
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I just read the first 3 chapters! Very excited to see what's next. Poor Sasuke...all he wants is his sexy Naruto!!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an absoloutly fantastc story!!!! I really love it and I can't wait for more!!!! I absoloutly like this Naruto although is kind of OC but non the less he is hot!!!! And His possesivness of Sasuke is also great!!!! And Sasuke is such a sweet heart also kind of OC but I really like thse to hw ou discribe them!!!! And I hope tht they all will come to terms with Naruto!!!! I somehow have the feeling That Kyuubi didn't kill Minato!!!! That ay t be my desire to have Kuubi as the good guy who didn't anything wrong and was acused of anothers deed but I sincirely hope we will get to know at somepoint of the story what really happend back then!!!! I totally adore this story!!!! I hope to hear from you soon and I hope They will reunite Sasuke and Naruto in the next chappie so that Sasuke wakes up and can convince his brother and mother that Naruto isn't the bad guy for the moment!!!! See you!!!!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a well thought out story... I often like to see a uke sasuke and a dominating naruto because I can never get use to a loud mouthed, bold, and rash naruto being a uke rather than a seme. Good work and I hope to see some great character development with naruto.... I just hope you don't change his ruthlessness along the way turning him into a crazy careful loving weakling... Nevermind that lol. Right now your story is the only one I look forward to reading on this site.... Its just so many stories lack substance to it. Oh and your title doesn't really fit the story you should make it grab the readers attention. The summary could use work as well. Im sure with your writing skills you can create something a little more appealing drawing more readers and reviews in. Ciao and goodluck with your amazingly interesting story.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Greatjob!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg you have ta update
like reaaaallll ssooon
Im leaving to pakistan in three days!
Ugh i dnt think ima have n e
internet there so please help a
young man out! lol
update soon plz
omg you have ta update
like reaaaallll ssooon
Im leaving to pakistan in three days!
Ugh i dnt think ima have n e
internet there so please help a
young man out! lol
update soon plz