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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this promises to be entertaining.
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see more of this. Naruto and Sasuke being handcuffed together is a pet fetish of mine, especially when they're bickering the entire time. I also love where they ended up. I'm really curious to see them getting along in this 'alien' world. Coping with the natives just raises so many possibilities for humor. ;p And that "adult" label leaves hope for smut. You can never go wrong with that. Thanks for sharing.
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was so great :) I enjoyed reading it a lot :) I hope to read more of it soon :)
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please let naruto be seme:)
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This Fic sounds Awesome!! Please Keep it up!! I can't wait for more!
& I agree with sess18 !! Please let naruto be Seme XD
& I agree with sess18 !! Please let naruto be Seme XD
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January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. Love it. Please, please continue.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, nice start. Just where are those two and how did they get there? I don't think their in ninja land anymore. Can't wait to see what you got in mind for those two, keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing your story.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much fun~! Nice and in character. Satisfying to see them together again - you wrote them so well, it feels like Naruto really caught up with Sasuke.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where you're going with this story.
But, I think that in the first chapter, you should have explained to the readers why Naruto and Sasuke still have their ninja skills if they're not in the ninja world anymore. (I'm assuming they're not in the ninja world) Well, scratch that. Maybe it'd make more sense to the readers if you gave them a small note explaining why they weren't in the ninja world anymore in the second chapter.
But, I think that in the first chapter, you should have explained to the readers why Naruto and Sasuke still have their ninja skills if they're not in the ninja world anymore. (I'm assuming they're not in the ninja world) Well, scratch that. Maybe it'd make more sense to the readers if you gave them a small note explaining why they weren't in the ninja world anymore in the second chapter.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great start for a fic....please more...oh and thank you...yeah...please and thank you.