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The begininning had me smiling like an idiot. I wonder though, are you yourself a dom or a sub?

O.O Adored! What I truely loved is how you put alot of the real elements of a true D/s relationship in there. Many people just put abuse and such and that's not what it is. Also they tend to just leave out alot of the psychological aspects out. Again..As always. Your fanfics are a breath of fresh air. And um....I want more to this than a one shot ><...lol. Love ya!

loved it and would love more chapters but am just as happy to have read it

Wooow!
I love this!

I don't usually read D/s fics, but this one was hot! Probably because Sasuke was still a beginner..
And I loved it that Sasuke was the slave and Naruto the Master. I like it more when Naruto is seme.

Oh and them connecting first at internet was just all hte more hot!
It made more realistic, that is.

Really good fic!

Nicely done~!

An internet D/s relationship, that’s new and so amazingly hot. I loved it!

It'd really be ashame not to review this. It was very original and wonderful to read. I never thought it possible to carry on a session like that over the internet like that but I guess anything is possible. And is it wrong for me to want to go all 'awww' because I thought the ending cute and clever how it turned out that they already knew each other. I could so see why Naruto wanted to keep it a secret until the end. The clever little devil.

Well great story and may the writing muses always be with you. XP