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Hmm, maybe I don't get this whole D/s thing... but I still don't get it - what WAS Sasuke supposed to do during that week? What does Naruto mean to "give in"? Was it just accepting the situation (of Naruto doing what he wants) or was he supposed to demonstrate it with his actions (if yes, how???)?

I've read this a million times and I still get hot each and every time. *LOVES*

I just finished reading the first chapter and omg you are such a cruel mistress, I love you for that. My god, I love it when Sasuke is tortured beyond belief... even if it's in a sexual way. It vexes me sometimes how cocky he can be and the fact that you basically have him begging for Naruto's touch makes me grin so hard my cheeks hurt. I also like a sadistic Naruto, maybe because he looks so innocent and naive sometimes that it just thrills me that he can be so cruel and sexy at the same time. I am very curious to what he did wrong and it's so cute that Sasuke is worrying that he might be replaced. That as smart as he is... as cunning as he is there is still a chance he might lose him. I'm sorry that that I'm actually glad that he is worried... I'm off and on with that Uchiha <.<;

But love this story, glad I bumped into it and can't wait to read more ^.^

An amazing story, the pschological element to it is so well thought out and extremly enticing. Naruto and Sasuke are both wonderfully characterised and the lanuage of the story is very engaging. I know there are audio versions to some of the chapters of your stories. Could I ask that you (if you can find the time of course) upload an audio version of chapter one of the this story. Or any chapter would be great but chapter one if the best. Sasuke's frustration is so well portrayed and him and Naruto are so well characterised.

Thanks a lot. I really enjoy your work.

Oh please do an audio version of this story. I heard your audio reading of breaking the rules part two and it made the story so intense and you also began to understand things you didn't pick up on when you were reading it yourself. So if you can spare the time, please make an audio version of this story it would be so great to hear.

Thanks a lot. High regards from MistressScotia.

This is a great story, I adore naruto seme stories because in my opinion Naruto is by far the strongest person there is in that world and is certainly stronger than sasuke although their personalities do mask that slightly. Even though Naruto is senstive and kind he also never backs down from anything or take orders from anyone while sasuke constantly lets himself get manipulated (examples: Itachi 'in a good way on Itachi's part but still', Orochimaru and at the moment madara) someone like him no matter how strong people take him to be on the outside is not in any way a seme.

People take them too much at face value but it's true that what's underneath counts. I wouldn't mind Naruto Uke if people didn't constantly turn him into a weak wimpering wreck (which is a totally stupid thing to do). The reason I like your story is becuse not only do you protray Naruto as strong but you don't turn sasuke into a quivering wreck either (which would also be a stupid thing to do). People seem to think that being a sub means being weak, I don't have much experience in matter liek these but I do know that's not true.

Anyway, I wanted to request a story from you. If you have any time I would love to seen how Naruto and Sasuke met on Monoshizukanohi.

Best Wishes QueenofQuill

P.S. When Sasuke gets his commupance and accepts his role that is the best part of the whole Monoshizukanohi series.

allow me to borrow Sasuke's words "Fuckin' sadist" :@

I was in pain the whole time ... felt tormenting equal parts of pleasure & pain through the whole god damn story ... I almost cried of frustration reading the bathroom part

hell ... who am I kiddin' ... I loved it ... every part of the torturous pleasure ... I just Sasuke deserved his punishment anyway ... just hopes he behaves better from now on :D

That...was intense. I like how you worked this relationship, nicely done.

hehehehe Naruto always has a full hands of Sasuke and Sasuke always has full hands of Naruto, they are made for each other :) This was great story I can't describe how happy I am that I found it :)

Do you have any idea how Epic you are?

Do you?

This story was brilliant and all encompassing and the fact that you uploaded it complete thrills me to no ends. The characterization was spot on and the reader was just as confused as to what Sasuke was doing wrong as Sasuke was (though we hit realization sooner than he!) Thse was extremely well written,i hope you upload some more of your work soon!

XOXOXs

Kei-chan