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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He some kind of shifter....a werewolf maybe. His mind is not taking it well...either this is his first time or he's transfromed before and something went wrong...they had to move to where they are now....and it's about to happen again....it's driving him insane..maybe Naruto can help him...calm him...love him?
Post soon!!!!
Post soon!!!!
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amicicide....have to admit....I have no idea what this word means and its so not in my dictionary......stupid dictionary....what good was it....ugh......
So far the story seems really interesting and full of suspense.....I so can not guess where this is going so this is kind of exciting to read more to see what happens next!!! :)
So far the story seems really interesting and full of suspense.....I so can not guess where this is going so this is kind of exciting to read more to see what happens next!!! :)
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Acrimonious-ok I so don't know this word either.....I know I sould look it up on the internet since my dictionary is totally a waste of time since it seems to NEVER have the words I'm trying to look up for more info....ugh
I like how this chapter went.....the suspense is just growing as well as the questions on what could be freaking out Sasuke so much. I so can't fanthom a guess on that one so will wait excitedly for what happens next!!!
I love Naruto's sense of humor!!! :)
I like how this chapter went.....the suspense is just growing as well as the questions on what could be freaking out Sasuke so much. I so can't fanthom a guess on that one so will wait excitedly for what happens next!!!
I love Naruto's sense of humor!!! :)
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chap.3
This chapter was very dark,mysterious,creepy and scary. It had me jumpy and looking over my shoulder. It sent chills up and down my spine. I can't even say what it was that made it so spooky but it was and I love it!! Can't wait to read what happens next!
This chapter was very dark,mysterious,creepy and scary. It had me jumpy and looking over my shoulder. It sent chills up and down my spine. I can't even say what it was that made it so spooky but it was and I love it!! Can't wait to read what happens next!
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January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ope et consilio-(Please explain this one for me??)
I enjoyed this chapter but am really confused why Sai did that and whats his obsession with Naruto?? Naruto may need to play sick for a little while to let the zombies take over the school so he wont have to go anymore....lol....cracking up...heheh Is Naruto the one going crazy???? Seems like everyone else has a better picture of things then him and are not reacting....so ....maybe the one going crazy is Naruto??? My Poor Naruto!!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!! :) PLEASE!!!! :)
I enjoyed this chapter but am really confused why Sai did that and whats his obsession with Naruto?? Naruto may need to play sick for a little while to let the zombies take over the school so he wont have to go anymore....lol....cracking up...heheh Is Naruto the one going crazy???? Seems like everyone else has a better picture of things then him and are not reacting....so ....maybe the one going crazy is Naruto??? My Poor Naruto!!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!! :) PLEASE!!!! :)
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January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wha-what- Why is there just a big chunk of text xD !? There were several areas where you could have divided that into different paragraphs and made reading go far smoother and be less intimidating in general X_X Hmmmm, well, anywho, we got a little more insight into Sasuke and suspicions as to why he freaks out around Naruto but not enough to be sure about what's going on just yet and there are more questions =o We'll just have to see how this plays out ^ ^ ~Kei-Chan
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, but WHY is he so crazy? Naruto, you know you can't leave well enough alone. Go pester him some more and find out.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm Sasuke is so strange >.> I like how you portray his weirdness ^_^
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I be slightly confuseeeeed D= Why Is Sasuke acting so ....crazy??? Lol for lack of a better word xD I'm sure you'll reveal all in due time x) Until then, fun update! Hope you update again soon =D
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, a magnificent start to whatever type of story this happens to be. I truly do enjoy your writing style; the quips, the observational hilarity and the ways in which you change up your adjectives make for an enthralling reading experience. I can't wait to read more.