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Hey Jelp! It has been quite some time since I last read your material and I remember the one story you were working on but had not yet completed was this one. The last chapter was left on a very hot and steamy note and besides the smutt surely to follow I was wondering where else you were going to lead this story as well as what the "secrets" you had hinted were to be revealed in further chapters. Do let me know if you just plan to no longer continue with writing material for this story but if you do plan on continuing then I hope there will be an updated chapter posted soon as it has been some time since your last update on "To See Your Face".

It's been quite some time since you last updated this story and I see at the end of the last chapter posted (chapter 5) that you were still on a mission to continue. Hopefully that is currently the case, right? I always enjoy reading your stories, but this one in particular a did like the best because no one else has come up with a love twist scenario like this one. And more secrets, you say? Oooo! I do want to know those as well.

Hopefully you will get the chance to come back on this story and write some more, Jelp!

~SasuNaru723~

Lol like a lost puppy sound so right lol
please don't leave us hanging

please tell me that this isn't the end please don't do this to me and on the good part to nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo please have mercy

*snicker* Painted Nail Revenge!!!! There's nothin' like prettying up a man's hands to hit them where it really hurts...

I'm sad to say I never thought of doing that with any of my ex's, but I DID get into a 'contest' with my high school best friend to see who could talk more guys into letting us paint their left thumb nail with glittery nail polish. I had clear, she had pink. Guess who won...

And with that odd detour down memory lane, I rejoin the main road to give two thumbs up and a bag of Oreos for the story! It's of the awesome. I am now a converted fan of yours :-D

I know exactly what you're talking about, doll. There's nothing worse than all of a sudden being alone and needing to be touched so badly that it feels like you're about to crawl out of your skin. Well...there are worse things, but at the moment it's happening... Wonderful chapter!

I'm guessing Sasuke wanted him since their school days. And clueless Naruto didn't have... well...a clue. lol

This is such a great story. I was so excited when I saw that you had updated - I love how original it is! Thanks for sharing and I hope you update soon!! :)

I've fangirled over this six ways to sunday already, not to mention re-read it probably five times since chapter five was posted, and I only just now made the happy mental connection: Naruto + Sasuke + Jelp + Shower = OMGFSJHGFUHVPASBV;SEHVIEUHGUHEXPLOSION!!!!!!!

As if I weren't excited enough...

WOW!! That was so STEAMY!!HOT!!EROTIC!! OH MY GOSH!!! SQUEEL!!!! :) You just totally made my day!! Hehe....came home from work and logged on to check my FAVORITE author!!! I was Thrilled to find the update!!! Computer has been buggy so its on and off days when we can log on to actually read updates....so I'm like HAPPY!!! YAY


I just LOVED how Sasuke played with Naruto and was completely in control!!!