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for To See Your Face

by Jelp

schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it.
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...I think I just exploded from the awesome. Have I mentioned lately how much I love you?
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't just like it!I love it! thanks for an amazing chapter! and they finally ..almost do it. Almost there Jelp, Almost. Damn, the wait is killing me! hmm..secrets huh?interesting....
person Cai
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are mean for leaving it there XD

But I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I was a bit nervous when Naruto chased Sasuke into the hallway, worried he would say something to Sasuke that he would regret later. Sometimes he says things in the Manga that just make me shake my head and say, "Oh, Naruto... did that shit really sound good in your head?" I'm so proud of him for wisely letting it play out. And it was nice to read the scene where the sex happened naturally. Wonderful job on the Frot and they way Naruto watched as Sasuke came.

Lovin what you're doing with both Naruto and Sasuke in this story. Very nice work on their characterizations. I look forward to more.

<3 Cai <3

person Anon
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Arghhh! Why stop there? Can't wait for the update. It seems Sasu has been holding out on Naru for quite some time. Hmmm...
person Kamren
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awesome. I'm enjoying this story way more then I probably should, but it is what it is. I'm sure the last thing you wanna hear is update soon so I won't say that... instead I'll wait patiently for your update and hope it includes lemony goodness. ^_^
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update this! Dont make me stalk you on ygallery! (cuz thats not creepy at all)
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*KLJHGGSMASH*

God, I think waiting for the next chapter of this is going to kill me. I haven't been this excited about a fic in a while, so THANK YOU FOR BEING AWESOME!!! I can't wait to see Naruto's mental Blue Screen of Death on this one...
person venus
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LIKED THIS STORY!!! It actually captured my attention cuz im like A.D.D half the time and I skim stories but this is really good!!! I want more hahahah I cant wait til u finish this!!!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooo, you have to update this! I'm dying here! I need to know what happens next!