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Hi! First time rewieving so, hajimemashite I' m Sorellona.
Love your works in general, but simply adore "To see your face" in particular.
I really really wonder if the choice made by Sasuke to be a porn star had just everything to do with Naruto' s youthful (can't believe i used the y. word!) wish to be a porn writer. Also his sudden desire to write about ninja and the consequential research to be done at Naruto' s dojo, is it just a mere coincidence??
Hoping my sucky english made some sense, I' m patiently waiting to see what you' ve got in store for us. ^^
Sorellona

I am absolutely loving this! I always enjoy your stories as you just seem to have a gift for writing original stories but always manage to keep Naruto and Sasuke in character (or as close as you can get since they are intent on jumping the other. sigh...wouldn't that be great if it happened in the manga? I would love Kishimoto-san forever!) Not only that but you smut scenes are always AMAZING!!! If only I could write like that, then maybe people would read my stories lol.
Anyway, keep it up! I can't wait to read about Sasuke watching Naruto at the dojo. They sooo want each other, I hope they hurry up and realise that!
Update soon or I'll start to get withdrawal and then I might do something drastic! lol
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At first I thought Sasuke did quit his job as a porn star, but then as soon as he input quickly that he was becoming interested in the field of writing, I knew it couldn’t be so, especially at the part where Sasuke wants to write a ninja story by watching the practices at Naruto’s dojo. My only thoughts were then at that moment, “Of course you want some ideas, Sasuke – of how you’re going to screw that tanned ass of Naruto’s when getting him alone after he’s all sweaty and worked up.” LOL! And even Naruto’s not only falling for the bait, but he’s also enticing Sasuke to do such dirty things to him! I love it! Of course it the story changes than what I thought based off this chapter then I won’t be disappointed. You always work these stories out to their best, Jelp so I know I’ll love whatever you write for the remaining chapters left of this story.

Oh and yes, I knew exactly what you were talking about regarding the need for contact. I’m a touchy person to a limit with the people I’m most familiar with of course and I like to stick close, touch shoulders, give hugs, and snuggle. When my ex broke up with me, the hardest part was realizing I couldn’t cuddle with him anymore despite the sheer closeness we had in our romantic relationship of 7 months. There were times where I’d find my hand almost reaching out to grab my ex’s shirt in attempts to drag him over to me and hug him. Of course I never did since I knew that would be inappropriate as past lovers. I almost didn’t mind having this guy I met a few months later sweet talk me and hold my hand while letting me throw my legs over his lap as we snuggled on a sofa. We talked and shared our common interests as well as had some quiet time of peace between us. He was so sweet, but I didn’t want to seem like I was replacing him with my previous relationship. I sadly had to let him go, but over the months I learned how to behave differently around my ex and I took comfort in hangout out with my two closest female friends which always gave me a hug or they would ‘glopped’ me as my best friend calls it when she pounces on me and hugs me to death.

This chapter was great, as I expected. And I know what you mean about missing the intimacy.

Jelp, I'm completely in love with this story. It's wonderful babe and you had me laughing so many times that I got "the look" from my hubby. I love the pace you're going in this and I love how you have Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke interact with each other. Their personalities are realistic and perfect in this. Your attention to the characterizations and detail are amazing. I look forward to reading more.

oh yes, I understand what you mean about missing missing the physical intimacy :S and hehe, that made me feel connected to Naruto XD hahaha, but at least he was wise enough to not snuggle with Sakura, I agree with him if he had... well that could get them somewhere else...

GODS! thank god they met again! it's fate! it's fate and no one will tell me the contrary XD hahaha, I loved how stalkerish Naruto was getting LOL but thankfully he doesn't have to do it anymore .:grins:.
and I wonder if that bussiness about the porn movies is really over? and I don't mean because I don't think Sasuke could quit but you know... if he is so popular his former boss could look for him, and will we know how he got in that position? hahaha... you know how random I am XD

aw... and I really loved Sakura in here, it was fun when she got 'angry' at Naruto, but it was nice of her to try to help him with Sasuke, she really must love him :D

I really like your Sakura in this fic. She is so awesome to want to help Naruto get with Sasuke, and was nice enough not to spill the beans at the massage parlor. I was expecting Naruto to have a tent when he got up from the table, and was gald to see you saved him the mortification.

Great chapter can't wait until things get steamy....

Thank God Sasuke quit his job. It was very disappointing to see that he was a porn star, as all you need to have in porn is a gigantic dick. And FYI, reviewing this is really amusing because the button says "Review to see your face"...yeah, I'm a dork.

So I love you Sasuke/Naruto stories and this one is no disappointment. I am impaitiently waiting for your next chapter.

You write brilliantly and... err it's brilliant. Sorry for lack of discriptors, I'm extreamly tired, but your writing is awesome and has never disapointed.