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Actually, for men, straight porn is a pretty shitty job. The women always get paid more. Example: Woman gets paid $350 bucks for a movie, man in same movie gets about $125. You get a little more if you have a nice body and a big dick, but it's not much. Merchandising is where you get the big bucks. You know, casts of your schlong for dildo models, et cetera. Men who want to get paid go for gay porn.

Enjoying your story so far. Hope to see more soon. :)

This story is so weird already. But I'm going to continue to read it because, well, I love you, Jelp. ^_^

i think...!

... that sasuke somehow sold himself for naruto's dream of writing, and when he found out that naruto didn't go into writing, he got angry because he's in a job he hates for nothing.

or something. but i do have to wonder why sasuke has scheduled sexual encounters with women, off camera. we all know he's probably thinking of how to go about killing himself in a way that would embarrass his father the most (if he hates him) or without making his mother cry (if he likes her) (or if they're even alive) as he does her. though, that's just my impression, lol.

i really like this one! (though i like everything of yours, so that's just a given). looking forward to the next chapter!

OMFG I'm in love already. This is such a great setup and Sakura is sooooooo empowered and in character. I adore the back story with Sasuke and the porn videos are just titillating. I really can't wait to see what happens.

And, oh, that last bit with the nail painting and sakura's eveel-green-gleam of doom made me die laughing.

loved it, please update soon.

oh I love the "type" of gay man you've made Naruto. Yeah for noon-stereotypical depictions. I really think the ramen was hilarious. Naruto is so utterly hopeless. I much admit I'm very curious about sasuke's reaction to Naruto not being a writer anymore, and equally confused about the girl's appearance. It was a very awkward scene, and really perfect for setting up the conflict to come. Really enjoying the plot progression.

I will say that Naruto's internal thoughts/monologue were a little long, and maybe some more dialog would have helped to show how he feels uncomfortable or how they're skirting around current "issues". However, it was a negligible issue and I'm sure we'll see plenty of interaction later! Please write more soon! <3 aa666

This is so good that I'm finally at the point of begging for Chapter 3 to come out soon this upcoming week! Very, VERY good! I do have a hunch of what Sasuke was thinking the entire time, but I won't tell until Naruto and Sasuke hook up as I wouldn't want to ruin the surprise. Hehehe. Talk to you next time, Jelp - and hopefully soon! ^_^

Omg I'm crying from laughter. Sakura is like the girlfriend from hell. One minute she's all turning Naruto gay and the next she's fighting him because she thinks he's cheating on him. Before finally deciding they are going to become BFF's so she can paint his nails.

God bless Naruto he got out at the perfect time before she could do more stuff to him o.<

HOW DARE SASUKE NOT BE GAY >< I'm not like a very big fan of Sasuke... barely but Naruto really seems to like him in the anime/manga and if my dobe is happy I am. SO HOW DARE HE NOT BE GAY ><

Or if he is how dare he kick my poor blonde out to screw with some red haired bimbo who was ready to throw herself at the both of them. Makes me want to do an Itachi and slaughter them. Grrr... but still good.

I half expected Naruto to suddenly pitch tent in his living room and declare that area his or something the way he made himself at home. And omg what is Sakura doing to my Naruto... I mean sure he's gay... but wtf. It's just too funny for words and can't wait to see more. XP

oh~ I gave no idea what's going on... for a moment I thought 'oh they are filming him without him knowing' lol~ but I know -or guess- that's not the case (yeah... I know I just want to make excuses for him XD)
pretty coincidence hu? meting Sasuke in a shop like that, it was fate! XD the way Naruto was looking for ramen no matter what! I understand the feeling, when I really want something I get it!
it made me laugh how horny Naruto was :D all the time thinking about sex hehehe
and who was that s-? but I agree with Naruto, gods! the way Sasuke threw him away~ .:shakes fist angrily:.