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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm, interesting. please keep going; not sure what I think yet, but enjoy reading your stuff so I know it'll be good reading! ;-)
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww Naru feels rejected :/ I'm sure that's not Sasuke's gf. But does he bring his work home?
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:( That pretty much describes everything I'm thinking after having finished this chapter. I think it's time for Naruto to go back to Sakura to get his nails done again in hopes of lifting his spirits. I love the fact that Sakura, while slightly scary in her fag hag mode, is able to help Naruto settle into his new found gayness. So perhaps a nice visit with her, accompanied with ranting, chocolate, ramen, and dress up accessories will help ease the pain of his 'rejection' (I really hope it was all a big misunderstanding instead of actual rejection due to the possibility that Sasuke believes himself to be heterosexual). Keep up the awesome work, can't wait to see the next chapter! :)
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kinda sad you didn't add this to ygal, but I can see with all the hetero stuff you might not have felt comfortable posting it there...So anyway here are my thoughts on why Sasuke might have asked Naru to leave1
1. Sasuke got into a pinch with Oro and get sucked into the porn industry
2. Sasuke actually produces his own porn and uses his apartment for the set up?
3. Karin with a boob job look a like has something on Sasuke so he is forced to have heterosex with her when ever she asks?
4. Sasuke is a sex addict with a ramen fetish??
yeah like I said...no idea...LOL
But that is what I admire about your fiction it takes twist and turns and keeps us coming for more, can't wait to see where this one leads
Woohoo some porn...k there is my fangirl moment yeah..sorry bout that
1. Sasuke got into a pinch with Oro and get sucked into the porn industry
2. Sasuke actually produces his own porn and uses his apartment for the set up?
3. Karin with a boob job look a like has something on Sasuke so he is forced to have heterosex with her when ever she asks?
4. Sasuke is a sex addict with a ramen fetish??
yeah like I said...no idea...LOL
But that is what I admire about your fiction it takes twist and turns and keeps us coming for more, can't wait to see where this one leads
Woohoo some porn...k there is my fangirl moment yeah..sorry bout that
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Solid work. I look forward to reading more.
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I will say, your warning of the pairings did have me hesitant about reading this, because I can't see Sasuke with anyone but himself if not with Naruto. Lol! Ahh, but I caught on pretty quickly after the first few sentences of lovely smut. I was thinking to myself as I was reading, "Hmm... You know, I bet the OC is some random girl placed in this story because Sasuke's some porn star and Naruto's watching." And I was right! Yay for me! This is an interesting story and it will be even more interesting to see how the two past classmates meet. Sakura is so funny too and I can see her painting Naruto's nails for revenge (even funnier that you did the same to your ex but I do frown upon cheating men of course). I wish Sakura could be a little more carefree in the current chapters of the manga (she's kind of going back on my hate list because of her irrational decisions to 'get herself killed for the umpting time'. Hopefully she won't be the one to officially begin the all-out-war-of-hell, dooms day style. Well... we can only hope for the best in the manga (and hope Kishimoto doesn't kill them all off, one by one like I've seen some creators do time and again). Until then, ja mata ne, Jelp!
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely something new! I love the plot already, and I can't wait to see where it goes! Awh, Naruto was so sweet with the break up. What a nice guy ^^
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. They're so much fun to read, and I haven't really reviwed because I forgot about my account, but now I did... Really looking forward to the next chapter on this. will be fun to see how it plays out.
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like this story... It's very interesting... wonder how Naruto will meet Sasuke again...
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nomnomnom *eats all the yumminess with with huge spoon* I'm hooked!