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It has been a while since I have read 'TORRID'. As always, it has me running the full gamut of emotions; and gratefully so. It's one of my favorite treasures. Thank you KKx3.

This is, and was, a great story and I'm more than glad I read it. I'm also feeling a little guilty about not leaving more reviews, but I've been having PC problems (I think), Wi-Fi issues,....or it's just this site..I don't know why, but often when I try to leave reviews on this site (at least lately) I end up having to hit 'refresh' a few times and then I have to check and see if the review went through, half the time I have to rewrite the review again and it takes the enjoyment out if it.
I look forward to reading more of your stories.

This story just blew my mind away the emotional roller coster that my emotions went though was crazy I just wasn't sure how this was gonna go at first I honestly thought that naruto wasn't gonna take sasuke back at all and move on but I'm glad I was wrong. I loved how funny you made naruto you had me dieing st his silly jokes he was just so perfect even when he was at his lowest he never lost that joking spirit about him which really helped him a lot I think. I also just died when all that stuff happen with them when naruto finely had enough I was crying like a baby all I wanted to do was hug him and slap sasuke upside the head. I really took my time reading this one and now I can't believe it's over! I was like NOOOOO it's over what do I do with myself now? Lol. Also the thing with how nije was getting his seal removed was awsome I loved that I really thought that was something great it really was something good I wish vould have happen in the real story for him but sadley it didn't. Some of the time I was rooting for nije some with naruto cuz of how much of a dick sasuke was being he mad me wanna kick his ass a lot when I was reading this but thankfully he got his shit togeather and fixed thing's. Also I'm still pretty mad at sakrua's way of doing stuff when it came to grtting sasuke it made for a good plot very well done I was thinking to myself how in the hell did she get him to marry her? Then I saw it and wanted to punch her in the face. Also the Cd sasuke did for naruto really touched me that was sweet I was like awwww ;-;and when he played it for him for him the first time I was crying a little it was just thst touching and I have very much enjoyed reading this I'm glad it's done cuz some of them cliff hangers I was like o god no it can't end there! Thank you for the great story I will be radeing you're other work to read as well :3 I gives this 10 out of 10 on the great story list ^^

Ohhhhhhmygod. Just reread this for the first time in soo long and its still as good the 148th time around. Masterpiece on your hand right here.

The SERENDIPITY of the INEVITABLE perfectness that is ‘TORRID’.
It’s like BRIGHT LIGHTS SAVING ME on a lonely nights.
Sasuke’s and Naruto’s story hailed as though a brilliant director shouted “LIGHTS, SEX, DESTINY!”, to perfect their tale.
SASUKE’S DEFECTION of marring Sakura, AND Naruto’s RETRIEVAL of their love, well…it was so raw, so :UNEDITED!!
This story was BIRTHDAY WISHES come true and a dance party where DISCO AIN’T DEAD!
There was that much joy.

Thank you:)

(as for LIBRARY SKILLS FOR DOBES...yeah,I got nothin...)

It was a perfect story:)


I am guessing this takes place one, possibly two years after the last chapter and plays out over six months to a year?
I am so grateful that you didn’t make this fairytale ending perfect.
There were no songbirds and rainbows (well maybe a few rainbow flags) all sparkling in perfect weather sunset.
You had injured parties, wounds and raw emotions that take a long time, if not a lifetime to heal.
But you gave them all will and hope, and for that alone I will worship you at your shrine forever.
You made me cry again…of course the fact that I hit my head against the wall last week when I saw that this was posted MONTHS ago made me cry too…

“Still having trouble letting go of those keys I see.” - Perfect.

"When do you think it's going to be finished?"
"Hopefully never..." - Perfect.

Sasuke smiled to himself and settled in to explore his new toy, in his new home. It may not have been perfect, but right then, Sasuke honestly could not tell the difference.
– Perfect ending.


Thank you.

BTW – I WUV YOU TOO!!!!!!

Amazing. That is all there is to say! I waited during this whole story to review it and it was well worth it! I usually stick to shorter ones but this is the first long story that I have read on AFF, positively great. Loved it all! You are very talented and can keep it interesting! ^_^

an haapy ending !! naru finally forgave sasu , I want a compose classic song !! so romantic!! I really had a great time reading your story !!
congratulation !!

Even if this story had been absolute crap (it wasn't), the writing had been terrible (again...it wasn't), and I completly hated it (NEVER!).....
I would still read it over and over (I have) just for the banter between the characters (especially Sasuke and Neji). I absolutely adored it and thank you for updating and tying up all the loose ends.

Man, this has been such an adventure! Brilliant story. Such an amazing ride. Extremely well written. I'm super glad that you were able to finish it. Those two epilogues were certainly a treat.

Great job!!!