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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 19 chapters in two days and I am...speechless. You are getting a shrine in my closet right next to Masashi Kishimoto-sama and Crimson court-sama's shrine. ^.^
The love triangle is perfect! I think you captured the story line of Naruto in RL faultlessly. What I love the most is how you've kept the personalities exactly like the manga. Sasuke's personality is so....Sasuke! I hate when he is turned into a sugar-coated-happy-go-lucky lover. You've also made me fall for Neji. Of course there is no Naruto without Sasuke, just like there is no Sasuke without Naruto. That's just a fact of life. It won't stop me from loving all the wonderful personalities you've thrown into the drama of epic proportions! I will be eagerly awaiting the next update!
*Pets teh fluffy bunny* =3
The love triangle is perfect! I think you captured the story line of Naruto in RL faultlessly. What I love the most is how you've kept the personalities exactly like the manga. Sasuke's personality is so....Sasuke! I hate when he is turned into a sugar-coated-happy-go-lucky lover. You've also made me fall for Neji. Of course there is no Naruto without Sasuke, just like there is no Sasuke without Naruto. That's just a fact of life. It won't stop me from loving all the wonderful personalities you've thrown into the drama of epic proportions! I will be eagerly awaiting the next update!
*Pets teh fluffy bunny* =3
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August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love you, you gorgeous piece of man/woman writing flesh! Everything is amazing- besides a plot line that rivals the epic saga of Naruto (or any block buster movie)- the characters are perfect. <3 *muah*
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August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Time of death - 21:43...
There was a solemn silence in the room before, like a banshee, Sakura screamed "Nooooooooo!"
and grabbed the traveling defibrillator from her bag and dove for the annulment papers.
"Oh for Christ sake.." Ino mumbled as she executed a graceful roundhouse to the forehead and Sakura flew in an arc across the room landing on the couch. Before given a chance to recover, the 'Ghost of Marriages Past' slapped a Shirley Temple Black in her hand and said "Nice try chickie!"
But let not beat a dead horse.....
sorry, sorry....
OK, I said I was sorry!!!!
this is late, I know.
I was out of town and finally got to write.
as I said all along, Sakura is not bad, misguided, vulnerable, insecure and a wee bit stupid, but not bad.
as for Neji, whom I love, I get the feeling Neji is going to be so busy with his uncles 'plans' that he won't have time for a relationship.
and you made Sasuke cry, and his dad human and his mom happy and you better have Itachi show up somewhere...oh the warm and fuzzies....
really nice bit with Sakura and Naruto, all the right rollercoaster of emotions there. beautiful.
Sakura swung her head around so quickly, she almost gave herself whiplash. "You've had sex?" - Perfect:)
"Fucking Sasuke…" She muttered darkly as she slumped defeated over the counter. "Fucking Naruto… Fucking Naruto who's fucking Sasuke…" - Perfect:)
"After all the upheaval and paradigm shifts lately, it's kind of comforting to know you're still an idiot." _ Perfect:)
thank you:)
There was a solemn silence in the room before, like a banshee, Sakura screamed "Nooooooooo!"
and grabbed the traveling defibrillator from her bag and dove for the annulment papers.
"Oh for Christ sake.." Ino mumbled as she executed a graceful roundhouse to the forehead and Sakura flew in an arc across the room landing on the couch. Before given a chance to recover, the 'Ghost of Marriages Past' slapped a Shirley Temple Black in her hand and said "Nice try chickie!"
But let not beat a dead horse.....
sorry, sorry....
OK, I said I was sorry!!!!
this is late, I know.
I was out of town and finally got to write.
as I said all along, Sakura is not bad, misguided, vulnerable, insecure and a wee bit stupid, but not bad.
as for Neji, whom I love, I get the feeling Neji is going to be so busy with his uncles 'plans' that he won't have time for a relationship.
and you made Sasuke cry, and his dad human and his mom happy and you better have Itachi show up somewhere...oh the warm and fuzzies....
really nice bit with Sakura and Naruto, all the right rollercoaster of emotions there. beautiful.
Sakura swung her head around so quickly, she almost gave herself whiplash. "You've had sex?" - Perfect:)
"Fucking Sasuke…" She muttered darkly as she slumped defeated over the counter. "Fucking Naruto… Fucking Naruto who's fucking Sasuke…" - Perfect:)
"After all the upheaval and paradigm shifts lately, it's kind of comforting to know you're still an idiot." _ Perfect:)
thank you:)
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August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PS - denials of lateness will be noted on your Goddess chart!
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to see how Sasuke will handle things from now on and what Narutos response will be.
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I was waiting for the next chap with such impatience and was so happy to finally read it! So, the bastard finally got the idea of who he wants and how to get him... I was totally surprised though that Naru rejected his "innocent" invitation but I guess in the context of this particular stroy it is all right. Great chapter! And I really liked the Sakura/Naruto talk.
And I want to praze how you have written the sceen between Sasuke and his farther - very touching... Tbaks a lot!
And I want to praze how you have written the sceen between Sasuke and his farther - very touching... Tbaks a lot!
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the latest chapter. I read the entire story the whole way through a bit back and tagged it to my favorites list so I could come back and check up onit. Its a beautiful well written story and I can't wait for more!
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Io is my favourite XD
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah, you're back!!!!! this chapter totally kicks booty ... i luved the part where sasuneji's poppas were screaming at them, and sasu's dad came out on top; at least so far anyway. ;-)
ok, you've drawn it out, now let the unhindered narusasu begin, and put neji to the curb. yes, i like naruneji as much as anybody. but the "you deserve better and i'm just better" attitude really stunk. LOL!! but hey, it made for really cool catfights to read, and there was finally some fist action too. drama, drama, drama. gotta luv it.
ok, you've drawn it out, now let the unhindered narusasu begin, and put neji to the curb. yes, i like naruneji as much as anybody. but the "you deserve better and i'm just better" attitude really stunk. LOL!! but hey, it made for really cool catfights to read, and there was finally some fist action too. drama, drama, drama. gotta luv it.
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story a few days ago. Fantastic writing! I even checked out the fan created video. I can't wait to find out what happens next!