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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God - I cried, I laughed. Sasuke-Bastard - he's been forced to dig deep and found some emotions. Sakura got hers, still not really accepting it though. Please, please don't be nasty to Neji, he has been Naruto's saviour, and I would hate to see him shipped off to some moon base or other to open up a branch of Hyuuga Industries or whatever. I want to see how it wraps up, but then what?? It can't end!!! Great work
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed the latest instalment, particularly your perfect pace!
You reveal things at the right moment, and progress smoothly, allowing the characters to progresses realistically, it brilliant.
Plus you have such eloquence in your words! Can't wait for more!
You reveal things at the right moment, and progress smoothly, allowing the characters to progresses realistically, it brilliant.
Plus you have such eloquence in your words! Can't wait for more!
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm glad that Sasuke finally stood up to his dad and his dad approved!!
Now all he needs to do is give Naruto a little time and space. Hmm, I wonder what Sasuke should do to pass the time instead of sitting at home alone, twiddling his thumbs like a loser. I know!! How about a gay cruise to the Caribbean?? That'll show that stubborn Naruto for turning away from him! (LOl, I'm just kidding, but dammit, Sasuke should stop being so stalkerish, lol! XD)
Now all he needs to do is give Naruto a little time and space. Hmm, I wonder what Sasuke should do to pass the time instead of sitting at home alone, twiddling his thumbs like a loser. I know!! How about a gay cruise to the Caribbean?? That'll show that stubborn Naruto for turning away from him! (LOl, I'm just kidding, but dammit, Sasuke should stop being so stalkerish, lol! XD)
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was on a roll coaster of emotions! You even had me feeling sorry for the soon to be X? The title of this chapter was so perfect:) Sasuke blossomed more than the rest. I CAN believe that standing up to his father and crying while doing so was more pain than he had felt in his hold life! I loved that part:) Then when he went to the window and seen Naruto looking up at him. WoW that was so loving and being connected to each other.(fangirl smile with little hearts dancing around my face) Now to the funny stuff with the girls when they were drunk! I loved every bit of it! Espeically Ino going into fangirl mode:) I do love your long chapters! AND I missed you to!! ^_^
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeee!
Great chapter.
Great chapter.
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
REVIEW!!
KAGE!! YOU'RE BACCKKK!!!! *GLOMPS*
We missed you, and prayed for our beloved couple to come back!! I just logged in and was so delighted to see an update staring me smack in the face!!
Sasuke, has FINALLY faced up to his father and it was such a relief and uplifting experience for that to happen. Having deft knowledge of the kind of reputation that Fugaku has in any story i encounter him in, he steel hold is legendary. He really prob is getting old! (HAHA!)
Naruto and Sakura's ironic situation: I literally did not breathe. I held it for the entirety of those few paragraphs...I was like SHIT! she's FINALLY GONNA FIND OUT!! I didn't expect her to faint though, that caught me off guard.
Intermission: what is going on with neji? and what "plans" does his uncle really have?
I want to be placed as INO hell-to-the yeah!!yaoi fan-girl all the WAY!! really, the shame on sakura for withholding such valuable information
and finally..some reconciliation between my two best men, i do love the pair wholefully. and three more chapters huh? I'll take them in stride!
KAGE!! YOU'RE BACCKKK!!!! *GLOMPS*
We missed you, and prayed for our beloved couple to come back!! I just logged in and was so delighted to see an update staring me smack in the face!!
Sasuke, has FINALLY faced up to his father and it was such a relief and uplifting experience for that to happen. Having deft knowledge of the kind of reputation that Fugaku has in any story i encounter him in, he steel hold is legendary. He really prob is getting old! (HAHA!)
Naruto and Sakura's ironic situation: I literally did not breathe. I held it for the entirety of those few paragraphs...I was like SHIT! she's FINALLY GONNA FIND OUT!! I didn't expect her to faint though, that caught me off guard.
Intermission: what is going on with neji? and what "plans" does his uncle really have?
I want to be placed as INO hell-to-the yeah!!yaoi fan-girl all the WAY!! really, the shame on sakura for withholding such valuable information
and finally..some reconciliation between my two best men, i do love the pair wholefully. and three more chapters huh? I'll take them in stride!
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just wow! This is an amazing chapter. I like how you tied up Sasuke & Fugaku's interaction & sort of lead into Neji's future.
Can't wait to read more!!! Excellent chapter that touched on alot of parts in the story & yet did not feel rushed.
Can't wait to read more!!! Excellent chapter that touched on alot of parts in the story & yet did not feel rushed.
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sakura gets it......finally......isn't it amazing how blind we can be when it suits us??? sasuke had the right of it...the girl could be smart when she wanted to be......we like to hide the truth from ourselves when there's pain involved....good for her for moving on. i still can't believe that those girls did not know that the boys were sooooo gay for eachother.
this is your captain speaking.....buckle up people it's all down hill from here.....sorry i was listening to grandfunk railroad....i'm your captain during this review so hence the captain reference....never mind me i'm just tired as hell and this song just does it for me when i'm tired and still need to stay up.
oh and this is my ?? oh who knows i think 3rd review cuz i love you and your hard work.
thanks for the update
this is your captain speaking.....buckle up people it's all down hill from here.....sorry i was listening to grandfunk railroad....i'm your captain during this review so hence the captain reference....never mind me i'm just tired as hell and this song just does it for me when i'm tired and still need to stay up.
oh and this is my ?? oh who knows i think 3rd review cuz i love you and your hard work.
thanks for the update
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's right Naruto, make him work for it.
I would personally love to see Naruto and Neji wind up together, but I am fully aware that won't happen. It's just too bad. It would have been the icing on the cake after that dogfight, LOL! Sasuke would pout for years!
Ahem. Anyway, I get the impression this story is nearing its end. So I'll indulge my Naruto x Neji fantasy a while longer, until it's over for good. *sigh*
I would personally love to see Naruto and Neji wind up together, but I am fully aware that won't happen. It's just too bad. It would have been the icing on the cake after that dogfight, LOL! Sasuke would pout for years!
Ahem. Anyway, I get the impression this story is nearing its end. So I'll indulge my Naruto x Neji fantasy a while longer, until it's over for good. *sigh*
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I'm watching the Hindenburg crash is slow motion (in reference to Naruto/Neji relationship). I know this is a Sasuke/Naruto and they OBVIOUSLY belong together but I hate sad endings for people who don't deserve them. In this case Neji. You've been hinting that Hiashi has major plans for Neji that will probably allow him a much bigger role in the company (and eventually take it over?) which is awesome by itself, but I was wondering/hoping that maybe Neji could find someone after Naruto finally gets with Sasuke (please?). Just a thought.
That scene with Sasuke and his father was really touching. Do we get to see Itachi get welcomed back into the fold?
I'm glad Sakura finally gets it. Even though she's hurting, she should have know better than to force the issue and basically buy Sasuke in exchange for her dad's company.
Great chapter! Love this story!
That scene with Sasuke and his father was really touching. Do we get to see Itachi get welcomed back into the fold?
I'm glad Sakura finally gets it. Even though she's hurting, she should have know better than to force the issue and basically buy Sasuke in exchange for her dad's company.
Great chapter! Love this story!