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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Anon
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I still have my mind set on Neji with Naruto, but Sasuke is finally making some major strides... though, he still has close to a decade of making up to do. Kinda holding out for an awesome threesome, since other compromises have been coming about.

Sakura is still self-centered, but she now seems to be forced to move along and accept that which she cannot change. If it had actually been a girl that Sasu was in love with, you know she would have done something nefarious to her, especially with how she was still grasping at a way to force Sasu's hand through his father. I can't get how she can be so indignant that Sasu has been in love and having sex with one of HER "closest friends", when if memory serves, she purposefully insinuated herself into there already very strong (pre-sex) relationship/bond. I have no love for her. Naruto doesn't own her a damn thing, much less the answers that she seeks. She's definitely not the type of person/friend you can trust with how low she has stooped.

Was curious of what Naruto's friends might have thought of the Sasu/Neji battle, since Shika was informed by Asuma. Since we saw Naru's interaction with Sasu after the fight, was hoping to see what went on when he first saw Neji.

I am glad the patriarchs of both clans are striving to change their ways for the future of those they care for. Also curious of how/if Itachi will be brought into the picture and why exactly he was out of it in the first place.

FUNNIEST MOMENT - Ino off in her yaoi fantasy land. Too funny. Makes me feel sorry for her gay friends. Oh, also liked the bit about Sakura's 'experimental' phase.
person DarlingShadow~
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol I loved Sakura's reaction to finding out about Naruto and Sasuke... to just pass out.
I love your work! Keep up the awsomeness that is you, please?
And thank you for updating!
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i will heart you forever for this story. it is wonderful with real emotions that make me cry and go YOU IDIOT!!! *shakes fist*

a song i fell in love with recently fits it well i think.

Little Lion Man by Mumford and Sons

keep up the excellent work <3
person lividangel
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
excuses, excuses, excuses!!! first football, now tennis, what's next men in tight spandex on bikes?!!!
now listen here missy...... umm...... oooooh... so fluffy... umm..... what was I saying?




um, yes...

I glad you are making this a slow evolution and not making this easy on any of them.
and oh the boys took out there claws, rar :)
looking forward to the father and son reunion.
lovely, lovely. thank youuuuuu.

.....oooooh.... so very fluffy.......

person Luddie
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...Never in my life have I stayed up twice up until the wee hours in the morning just to read something as amazing as this. OMG! You just don't know how much love you've brought back to one of my original pairings~ Just, for a while I've quit Naruto. Hoping that one of these coming years, Sasuke would die but.... This fic brought back my lovehate for this pairing~ I would like to thank you for being such an amazing writer and I hope to see more because.. My dire need for this pairing and this fic is... OVER 90000 DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: BTW I love all the safety dance refs. It amused me a great deal and its the most In Character thing Naruto WOULD do~
person dreamer
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting. Sasuke was kinda right in what he said at the end.
person Ivy
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Epic fight! Glad Hiashi accepted Neji's recommendations. Sakura must wish she never forced Sasuke to marry her. Naruto seems destinied to hurt someone no matter what he chooses. Very involving fic!
person 7troublesome
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chap! So the little bastard finally showed his claws, though I vote for Neji with both hands I really doubt that Naruto will stay with him. I totally look farward to Sasuke's suffering - please let it be long and real, the bastard deserves it!
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fight!!! Things are getting heated!
person dar
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY for a new chapter!!! The best part was definitely the fight!! I'm really stuck between who to choose, sasuke or neji, yea sasuke loves naruto and all but because he can't declare his love for him to the world it feels like sasuke is ashamed of naruto.....while neji, he's pretty damned intent on declaring it once naruto lets him. So for that.....I think I would choose neji.....but sasuke's past with naruto just makes it sooo hard!! haha definitely a good story!! Thanks again!!