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by KageKitsuneXXX

schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is such a bitch.
person cynaga
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 18) great chapter! lots of tension and action.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did you know that I died? I f-ing DIED since the last chapter Kage. I've been a zombie roaming the earth hoping for an update!! And finally here it is!

Fuck Sasuke! you need to make something big happen because right now neji is winning and you cannot let that happen man!!no way! he bested you with that closet thing!

Naruto still cares no matter how much he damn well tries to denies it. Yet, how do you stop caring for someone you've loved all your life? That's hard so so hard. If sasuke was injured really badly and neji asked him to stay could he? and if sasuke REALLY moved on to some other guy, could he REALLY cope with that? no, he couldn't

As such, neji needs to fucking disappear for christ' sake! dammit!
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
breathtaking, as usual ^_^
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm telling you, I'm so happy that I'm on vacation and not sneaking in the middle of my work day to read this!!! I SCREAMED when Sasuke threw that first punch! Omfg! Wow. Now I expected Naruto's reaction to the "I love you" but a public fight between Neji and Sasuke?! Jesus Christ, Mary AND Joseph! Wow! I know I've said it before, but I love this story!
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, Oh my God!!! That chic fight was the best ever. I liked how Sasuke made sure to finish his drink before he just said eff it and blindsided Neji. Then you have Neji b*tch slapping Sasuke... that was classic. I also like Sasuke having to work hard to get back together (the cello over the answering machine was good) and that Neji managed to make the point that Naruto is choosing not to exist in a shady relationship anymore. Loved it. Please keep it comin'.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn it! How much longer till the finally hook up! Stupid Neji back down! Update soon please?!
person roro237
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You had me cracking up first off with the emotions of World Cup:) Then Rafael Nadal needed your attention:) I didn't know where you were taken us after that I love you from Sasuke?! Fluffy bunny I loved where you took us! It shouldn't be that easy! Sasuke still has to many lose ends right?! I love it!!! You wont be done with this story soon!(spinning around for joy in my compute chair) I was laughing out loud at why a clan would teach a man to slap another man as a fighting technique. That struck me as so funny. One reason was because Sasuke was pulling Neji's hair:) It was like a girl fight. I really loved this one oh I say that everytime:) I did love this chapter Mrs.Soon to be X Uchiha got a little smack-down. Neji got a little joy from his Uncle. This was my pick me up today! Thank you ^_^
person dreamer
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so he finally said. I can't wait to see what Naruto's response is.
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am holding my breath until the next chapter.