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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Zeph
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was an intense chapter! I'm glad that Sasuke finally seems to see what's or better who is really important to him and I'm curious what Naruto's response will be. But I also hope that Sasuke doesn't say something like "See, I love you, we can work it out. My father wouldn't accept us anyway...." and so on afterwards. That would make me want to hit him!
person 7troublesome
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome story! I totally liked how intense it is!!! I will be waiting with anticipation for the next chap!!!! So Uchiha has declaired a war!!!! Take out your katana, bastard, and show her what you are made of!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was totally your best chapter EVER! I loved it so so so so much, it's amazing. I can't wait to hear Naruto's response, let's hope he finally accepts Sasuke's feelings.
person cynaga
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story~! ♥
person roro237
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bunny girl I second the statement on the World Cup and beautiful guys! I like to call it the eye candy festival it only happens every four years so you can have as much as you can hold in 30 days:) I love your Naruto with his wise cracks. I'm laughing one minute and the next I was getting choked up. You covered every emotion including lust in this heavenly chapter:) You're a good bunny girl:) I have new love for Kiba with his visit to Sasuke. Sometimes I think like Naruto that Sasuke is Kakashi favorite. But at the sametime Sasuke needed someone in his corner. I'm glad Neji knew up front what might or most likely would happen because I'm feeling his pain. I know it can't be helped. The heart wants what it wants:) I just loved everything in this chapter and I could go on and on and on:) Thank you for all the wonderful hard work it was a pure joy reading ^_^
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO at Kiba.

So...Sasuke finally removes his balls from his mouth. It's about damn time.

Poor Naruto.
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Superlong chapter. I like, I like. You GO Hinata! She definitely has more balls that those whiney males. It's nice to know that Sasuke can reveal his love to Naruto, but revealing and living up to it are two different things. I really don't want to see Neji leave. I agree with someone else who is hoping for a compromise with the relationship, but is there enough Naruto to go around? A threesome would not work unless Neji and Sasu can find some common ground. Oh and the whole safety dance thing was just too funny. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person qwerty
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. By far the best chapter yet!!! When I first read "You're the wind and I'm fire" metaphor I absolutely loved it and I still do. So apt.
I feel a little bad for Neji. Even though he and others knows it's coming (the "time in the sun" metaphor was awesome too! Basically I love your writing :D), it's still really hard to read what's happening to him.
Great, freakishly long (not that I'm complaining!) chapter! Loved every bit of it!
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Goshhhhhhhhhhh!!! *she dies from happiness at this moment* XD *this is the look she died with* Lol
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, breath-stealing chapter. I can't even predict how this story will end. AT ALL.

Please please update soon!