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by KageKitsuneXXX

person SexyRyu
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I hate angst and drama, you know why? Because I can't stop reading it! It's like a potato chip, I have to keep going. I let a few chaps. pile up before reading again (I've been so busy it's depressing) and for the past 3 hrs of reading I have gone up and down and up and then crashing down again. I hate this fic cuz I love it and it's so well written. Neji is a doll (pls don't make him sad). There are tons of quotes there that made me just burst in laughter, gawd that was great. Thank you for such a dreadfully awesome fic hun, and I'll anxiously fret and wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I checked back everyday to see if you updated, and I was so happy when I came on and there was one here!
I am sorry to hear about your family member, I hope things are going okay.
This chapter was wonderful, and it was the one I was waiting for.
Pfft, I think Neji is being a bit unreasonable.... I hope we get some SasuNaru again soon!
person dhur
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear you had a death in the family. You have my condolences. But as for this chapter.....it was definitely well worth the wait. I can't wait to read about naruto and what his decision will be. Though I do feel it very....easy for sasuke if naruto just chooses him because of that I mean he gave naruto up!!! There has to be more hell to pay than just sasuke seeing naruto move on!But I Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are a goddess.
person Anon
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story continues to captivate and entrance me. IT'S JUST SO JUICY!!!!! Please oh wise and wonderful author, continue to grace us with more story!!!! :D
person lirin
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Neji's reaction in this chapter is wonderful. I'm glad he is making Naruto chose.....take that Sasuke!!
person softwelshrain
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, sorry to hear of your loss - your updates have been sorely missed, but you should take your own time. Quality not quantity!!
Sakura - needs therapy. You cannot make someone love you, or even "see" you". Hopefully she will pay dearly. Rather arrogant of her to declare that Sasuke had no life before her - good grief.
Neji - Awwwwww. He should stick around for the true story and not just assume. But he was always heading for a train wreck (I was secretly hoping for a threesome).
Can't wait to see how it all pans out, Sasuke has already been cold to Sakura, now hell will freeze over. Enlightening about his father, why couldn't he just say that in the first place? Dear lord, secrets within secrets.
Checked out the U-tube as well - awesome!!
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Fugaku did a bang up job on damage control! Lol. And Sasuke fell for it! But whatever... And Naruto(I named one of my blond kittens after him -squee-)! He better not do what I think he's gonna do!(Cries) I love Neji-kun! Please don't do him like that Naru-chan! Don't be a dawg! You're better than that!


But always--- I'm sorry for the hell that you've been through for the last couple of months. Its hard but I hope things are looking up now. Luffs yous!
person qwerty
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'm very sorry for your loss. I hope you and your family will be able to make it through these tough times.

On a happier note, this chapter was everything and more when I envisioned the eventually confrontation! Well done!
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter. Sorry to hear about your family.

Keep up the great work!