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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Anon
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, it still stands that Sasuke has not promised anything different from before certain decisions he's made, regardless of the fact that he was duped. People always have choices from which to make decisions. What they decide says a lot about that person. Sasuke chose to hide his relationship with Naruto and refuses poor Naru's love confession, then get married to someone he does not like just to please his father. Why should Naruto go back to that? As for Neji, what the heck is he thinking just walking out (though I know he must be hurting)? He knows Sasuke is pushing hard to get Naruto back. Is he going to give him up without a fight? He's gonna have to stand his ground to keep Naru. Poor Naru... sucks to be him, but he did make a decision to break away from the madness. What will he do now?
person Allandaa
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Unexpected developments, but they turn out real great ^^ . I'm still wishing for a happy ending for everyone, and praying with all my might someone will hear me... Sigh. But for now the story is simply breathtaking.
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I love the drama! His dad is seriously messed up, Sakura (take that BITCH!) has finally gotten knocked down to where she's supposed to be and now I'm just waiting for Neji to kick rocks and leave! =3
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Never apologize for life getting in the way. Obviously this was immediate family if you were involved with the arraignments.
My condolences and Heavens Blessings to you and yours.

These were the very last words Buddha spoke: "Behold, O monks, this is my last advice to you. All component things in the world
are changeable. They are not lasting. Work hard to gain your own salvation. Do your best."



Now just for you:)

No black and white characters for you! Shades of gray (charcoal, dove, heather...yeah, heather...)

Sakura; "it seems horrible and evil of me" oh yes, this is exactly how I would start my defense...
Sakura: "besides being Fugaku-sama's second choice" like the killing intent wasn't strong enough...
I feel sorry for Sakura. Don't get me wrong, she deserves what she gets...but obsession often leads to bad choices,
not always bad people:(

"There should be blood on the walls!" I remember that review!!! :D
I think it's a tag line we should all use at least once a day...

Sasuke's growing a spine, Sasuke's growing a spine...(you can't see, but there is a dance accompanying this)
and can Sasuke and Naruto become any more confused/angst/torn?

I think Fugaku was perfect!
Fugaku: "I do not want my children shamed, Sasuke, I will not have them ridiculed and set upon, not while it
is within my power to prevent it. I told you before to cling to that happiness, and I meant it."
Oh sweet Jesus...that IS love! A parent's protection.

Neji...beautiful Neji...that's messed up...

cliched love but, "time heals all wounds" - (dusts off bunny suit and offers with sincere smile) "Do your best"

schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just watched the Youtube! It was brilliant, but I was so busy reading key words you wrote that
I had to look up the song lyrics.
'Until We Bleed' by Andreas Kleerup is perfect! Oddly eclectic and passionate and fatalistic.
just like our boys:)

the trailer was...scary, but like an accident you had to look:) Freaky fun!
congrats on your homage.
Hope it brings you smiles now.
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I'm happy it was "Life" stuff and not your computer. They can be scary sometimes. Love you a million ramen-bowls for the update!
Too bad Naruto can't have both Neji and Sasuke. Oh, no. My inner perv is showing.
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Umm, upon review, just wanted to say I'm sorry if the previous review sounded insensitive. It was not intended that way at all. Sometimes my fingers type without waiting for my brain to catch up. Deepest condolences to you. We love you with or without the bunny suit.
person Lil_lo
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you handled this chapter better than my wildest dreams. Fuguku blew my brains out! I'm so used to him having the cold uncaring FOR THE CLAN ideology, so having him basically say look I did i/you/i a favor was like wow...it sucks but when you really think about it he's right in terms of the world they're in. You brought that much power not having him be the stereotypical bad guy but a pragmatic father (oh I wish I could get other fanfic writers to study off of you and stop overdoing the character assassinations that they love to do).

Then there was Sakura. Sasuke had me chilled at how he handled her at the end, and I can feel the misery he'll unleash. I wonder about the fall out that will come when she learns that he was cheating on her because I don't see that staying a secret, and she's shown in her responses here that she can get cagey when pressed.

I hope that you and your family are as ok as you can be considering the circumstances.
person roro237
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bang bang you blew me away with this chapter!! WoW! That was so good:) Half of me is pissed at Sasuke the other half just feels sorry of him. Poor boy and his father issues. That was very deep what the father was thinking. Yes finally Ms.Pharmaceutical has just o d! The Pink one did have such a good explanation for her selfish-ness. She loves him and she was trying to give him a life! Who cares what he wanted!! I could ring her neck:) And it just kept on getting better. Neji comes justed in time to stir it up a little bit more. I did get a good laugh with his crack about the office supplies:) I'm sorry about your lost. I will check out youtube ^_^
person karasu-kun
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dammit!! that cliffhanger was the worst of the worst!! and by that i mean best of the best of course!!

i just wanna point out that i seriously hate Sasuke right now. like...i already hate him in the manga/anime but then this just makes me hate him more. He's always disregarding Naru-chans feelings >:V

i mean. i WANT them to be together, and to be happy! But if giving up Sasuke means Naru-chan can be happy then i approve and i think he's doing a bang up job with Neji as his new partner.

i can't wait to read more. deceptive Sakura is gonna get schooled! Right?? yea... im pissed at her too cuz no one would be going through any of this if she would've just accepted that sasuke wasn't interested *crosses arms with a scoff* that chick, i swear.


sorry for the long review. Had to get that out somehow *smiles* see you at the next update!