rate_review Reviews

AWESOME STORY!!! I liked it to bits! Especially AFTER NARU/NEJI debut - so Neji is going to kick the all-mighty Uchiha's ass - just plain awesome! Amazingly written Neji and not so self-sure Sasuke - pooor little uchiha thing, he is really suffering - I LOVE THE STORY!!!!!

Oh man, Sasuke's falling apart!

OHGODFINALLY. What a terrible thing for Sakura to do but at least now Sasuke knows and he can go about salvaging whatever there is to be salvaged. I just hope that Naruto and Neji aren't going to cause any problems. I can't bring myself to wish harm on Neji, he IS my favourite after all, but at the same time I was Sasuke to win this one. He's such a pathetic mess that I find myself really rooting for him. Well either way, I'm super excited to read the next chapter.

And cliffhangers are great, pay them no mind. I think they add greatly to the story's appeal :)
(and sorry if I reviewed twice, my connection is being glitchy)

OMG I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY FOR SO SO LONG, and I am too lazy to say how much I love it... But you've ended the 15th chapter HORRIBLY. OMG, not in a bad way, but in a good OMGINEEDMORE way

HOW COULD YOU?! REALLY HOW COULD YOU!? HOW COULD YOU JUST leave me hanging on your every word and then end with a cliff hanger! (do you see the tears streaming down, soaking my keyboard) You are pure unadulterated evil! I LIKE IT! Please update soon or I will find you and glue your fingers to the keyboard with my trusty pink glue stick...or not. That is your only warning...take it seriously...or not. (glares nastily at the computer screen and pretends to hear suspense music in the background)

Love the story and I hope Sakura gets what she deserves! Just don't hurt Neji too bad he is still my favorite hotty! TA TA FOR NOW!

definition of commodity:

-Something useful that can be turned to commercial or other advantage.

-a good or service whose wide availability typically leads to smaller profit margins and diminishes the importance of factors

-one that is subject to ready exchange or exploitation within a market


so I'm thinking Sasuke's anger over being traded as a commodity will turn to backbone against Daddy...

AHHHH!! *rips out hair* THE SUSPENSE!I am very very excited to see what happens next. Damn that coniving, secretive, manipulative bitch! Sasuke better punch her out, then go grovel to Naruto. ASAP!

Please update soon ^^

Sasu-chan does not seems to realize that what he is feeling about Naru-chan is pretty much the textbook definition of love in many people's head, methinks -_-'... I liked the part about the new couple being everywhere he looked though XD! The laptop part was sweet, too. And dammit but if you continue I could end up actually forgiving that *words censored* for running off and/or attempting/succeeding to kill the only bunch of people who actually cared about him. Two hold up confrontations in two chapter... really?

Don't you dare breake Neji's heart woman >< Sure I knew that this was NaruSasu from the start but Sasuke has been yoyoing Naruto's feelings for a while now. He can't have his cake and eat it too and even if he does leave Sakura it doesn't change the fact that he'd be willing to be open about his relationship with Naruto. Naruto deserves better, Naruto deserves Neji and I loved the key moment. I could visually picture that crap and I was dying laughing. I'd demand my key back immediately if I was in Neji's place. And omg the way Naruto did the do-over and clutched the key to him like he was going to go all Lord of the Rings and call the key 'his precious' was priceless. Shimmering tears nice touch but you should really move this story out of the Naruto/Sasuke category because it'd break my heart if they got back together.

VIVA LA NARU/NEJI!!! VIVA VIVA

You have no idea how long i was waiting for that update. Seriously I had to remind my self to start breathing 3 paragraphs in cause my chest started hurting. During the whole Neji Sasuke confrontation I was giggling every other sentence that my sister came over to see what I was reading. I loved this chapter and I don't mind cliffhangers that much whenever I read them I giggle like a school girl and check back twice a day for updates. Even though I'm hoping for a nejinaru pairing I will still keep reading if you go to SasuNaru. Think about an alternate ending pretty pretty please or maybe writing a NejiNaru pairing next because its my fav and there are not enough out there. You are made of awesome keep up the good work.